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Needs an editor, but is a fascinating read!,
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The premise is absolutely fascinating, however, I feel it could have been much better with a good editor or three. Most of the continuity errors occurred during the establishment of characters towards the beginning of the book (I caught three of them), but the grammatical and spelling mistakes continue throughout.
With that said, once I was mentally able to get past the mistakes, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The plot is well thought out and brilliantly executed. Air (the protagonist) is a very well developed character. The author keeps the reader guessing both about what we will find out about his past and about what is soon to happen to him. A sense of suspense is developed early on and sustained throughout the duration of this novel.
This is, overall, great work. I would recommend this book for the most part, and would purchase another by the same author if I had the chance.