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This review is from: Coltrain's Proposal (Make-Believe Marriage) (Silhouette Romance, No 1103) (Paperback)
WHAT??? Did I read the same book as everyone else?! The people who gave this book 4-5 stars must not have read many of DP's books (or romance books of any kind). I have read at least 15 of DPs books and I'm not covinced that she wrote this one at all! One day lou hates her, insults her, is disgusted by her and in 1 page's time he marries her. There was ZERO romantic development which is what DP is typically masterful at! I felt the characters had no kind of connection with each other at any time in the book including after they married and fell in love. They basically go from hating each other to pregnancy to The End. ZERO development of the relationship so the marriage seemed beyond ridiculous. I LOVE DP and thouroghly enjoy every page she writes. I have a difficult time believing that she wrote this book! Without question this is the worst I have read! Sorry DP!