I really appreciate your review, Ms. Grant. Different people have different literary tastes. However, I don't understand where you found fault with the "grammar and sentence structure." If that's because I sometimes wrote the dialogue in narrative style, without quotation marks and separate paragraphs, I did that on purpose, to make the action flow better, even if that's somewhat unconventional. I do try to use a distinctive style, and dislike much editing, or I wouldn't have published an original novel about a subject as controversial as the Talpiot tomb.
Best wishes to you.