Your rating(Clear)Rate this item


There was a problem filtering reviews right now. Please try again later.

21 of 23 people found the following review helpful
on May 18, 2009
I had a VERY DIFFICULT time reading this book digitally on my IPhone. EVERY PARAGRAPH OF THE STORY needs an edit. I am NOT kidding. There are spelling errors and/or misuses of punctuation in every single paragraph. A 12-year-old would even be upset trying to read this story because you have to mentally correct the grammatical errors before you can even begin to grasp the meaning of the story. Wow, I am very angered that I paid .80 for this story.

The storyline jumps ALL OVER THE PLACE and events are random and disconnected from the plot. There are so many time lapses that the reader is forced to figure out what has happened in the interim, because there are surely no clues given from the author.

None of the characters gains the sympathy of the reader. And the story is told from SO MANY points of view that it is sometimes impossible to know who is speaking because the author switches the characters mid-paragraph. The storyline itself is so IMPLAUSIBLE that it is truly laughable and ultimately makes no sense.

I am volunteering to edit the story and get it corrected before anyone else buys this. I am serious. I want a refund.
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
9 of 10 people found the following review helpful
on January 4, 2011
I can really appreciate Ms. Hubbard's sense of imagination and creativity despite the grammatical errors that were actually beginning to make my head hurt. It causes the reader to work harder than they have to in order to enjoy the book. This actually occurs in the other books of hers that I have had the pleasure of reading although, there were not as many. I still found this book to be very enjoyable!!!
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
5 of 5 people found the following review helpful
on April 23, 2011
I really enjoyed the storyline which was very original. The numerous grammatical errors made what had the promise of being an enjoyable read become an almost burdensome read. Great story overall, but the errors...
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
on February 7, 2013
I have not finished book yet, am on chapter seven...but if I were an author and a book that I had written was publihed with the astronomical amount of grammatical and spelling mistakes that I`ve encountered so far, I would be ashamed! With all the reviews written (and there are many!) complaining about this very serious problen in this book, I would THINK Ms. Hubbard would pull this version of the book, PROPERLY edit it and republish it!!! Have some pride in your work Ms. Hubbard! Will TRY to finish book, it`s not a BAD story~~but it won't be easy!
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on April 19, 2013
This book was full of imagination sadly the message gets a little mucked up with the grammatical errors and jump around and/or incomplete story lines. While some of the story line is really over the top it is quite enjoyable to read. I found myself shaking my head at some parts and saying "yeah right" but I still wanted to see how it would all play out. I read it through and through. I doubt I would recommend this to someone else.
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on October 1, 2012
Sylvia Hubbard has truly made a fan out of me. Each book comes packed with twist and turns. Just when you think it's over; your off on another ride. She keeps you on edge delivering all the way without a dull moment. I am in love with her characters and want MORE, MORE,MORE!!! Job well done Ms. Hubbard You make me want to visit Detroit with all the delectable men you write about! ;-).
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on February 28, 2013
Not only are we treated to a strangely woven love story, Sylvia Hubbard introduces us to a mesmerizing character in Lethal (someone who every man most surely would want to be like and every woman most surely would want to be with). Sex, murder, laughter, triumph......all the makings of a really good read. Please, Sylvia, keep them coming!
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on October 15, 2011
this book is a great read just wished she continue from where she left off then to make a different book with the same theme in stealing innocence 2 i didnt buy that thought it was going to be where she left off at but indeed this book was good cant complain at all a must read for you book lovers
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on February 10, 2014
I couldn't beleive what was happening in this book and the things that kimberly uncle made he do to getmoney that he didn't share with her or her brother. I also couldn't beleive the beatings she took from her uncle.
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on October 12, 2011
Love this book. Long good read, it keeps you wanting more. Waiting on part III and you know it! If you like a good book with a good plot this is the book to read.
0CommentWas this review helpful to you?YesNoSending feedback...
Thank you for your feedback.
Sorry, we failed to record your vote. Please try again
Report abuse
     
 
Customers who viewed this also viewed


 
     

Send us feedback

How can we make Amazon Customer Reviews better for you?
Let us know here.

Your Recently Viewed Items and Featured Recommendations 
 

After viewing product detail pages, look here to find an easy way to navigate back to pages you are interested in.