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I would say that a 4 year olds rendition of cinderella had more concrete characters
on July 26, 2016
I had the Misfortune of reading this-not even a full book- this incredibly rough draft. This book was the worst thing I had possibly read and this is looking back after about 5 years. I have read the 'puppy palace' series to 'common sense' and I have never encountered a book with such lifeless robotic characters that's pure ambition in life is for 2.5 ounces of copper. I have tried many times to finish this book. Even last week I tried after I had finished house of leaves I had the hopeful thought that this book was not as bad as I once thought it was but sadly, I was let down. The lack of detail was so great that I ended up putting post it notes to fill in the details myself which led to some rather hilarious corrections. And then comes the over detail to parts that the reader does not care for, and not even in a fun sense like douglas adams would write just...a bland 'so so' rendition. I have met the woman who has written this book and my only thought while listening to her speak was 'she seems like the person to leave a incredibly boring cover to her only work'. Miss Hill if you cant afford to get someone to draw something for your cover I will gladly draw something for you. So in essence a waste of 16 dollars and my time.