Anatomy of a Premise Line: How to Master Premise and Story Development for Writing Success 1st Edition, Kindle Edition

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Editorial Reviews


"Working with Jeff reminds me of a quote from Michelangelo, 'I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free.' Jeff’s tools have helped me develop solid premise and log lines, and to chisel my stories free from the stone. This book will help you do the same."

Michael Perri―Staff Writer, NBC’s - State of Affairs


"After reading Jeff’s terrific book I felt like rushing to my desk, new tools in hand, and fixing all my unsold screenplays. I highly recommend to anyone writing a screenplay or novel."

Nick Castle―Writer/Director, Escape From New York, Hook, August Rush, Last Star Fighter, The Boy Who Could Fly, Tap, Dennis the Menace


"Before, I used to write myself into a corner, but thanks to Jeff Lyons' premise tools now I can see my story’s structure from the outside, to see what's working and what could be stronger. This book will help you draw a map through the story forest, rather than getting lost in the trees. I've used this material with my students with the same beneficial effect as with my own writing. I highly recommend this book."

Malena Watrous―Author, If You Follow Me―Head Instructor Stanford University Online Writers Studio


"There is no book like this in the marketplace. It will help writers, producers, and directors, and save everyone from wasted time writing drafts to find a story. I wish I had this book when I was in film school."

David Jeffery―Producer, Fox’s - Bones, PBS’s – American Family, Lesson Plan

"This is a book for which many of us have been waiting, and if you are at all like me, incorporating Jeff's ideas and guidance into your work can make all the difference."

Barnet Bain―Producer, What Dreams May Come― Writer/Producer, The Celestine Prophecy


"Story structure changed my writing life, and the magician who taught it to me was Jeff Lyons. Every writer on the planet needs coffee, chocolate, and this book!"

Caroline Leavitt―New York Times bestselling author, Is This Tomorrow and Pictures of You

--This text refers to the paperback edition.

About the Author

Jeff Lyons is a freelance writer, story editor, script and book doctor, and has worked in

the film, television, and publishing industries for more than two decades helping literally

thousands of screenwriters and novelists tell better stories. He is an instructor through

Stanford University’s Online Writer’s Studio, and is a regular guest lecturer through the

UCLA Extension Writers Program. Jeff’s writings on the craft of storytelling can be found

in leading industry trade magazines like The Writer’s Digest, Script Magazine, and The

Writer Magazine.

--This text refers to the paperback edition.

Product details

  • File size : 5178 KB
  • Publication date : June 5, 2015
  • Word Wise : Enabled
  • Print length : 194 pages
  • Publisher : Routledge; 1st edition (June 5, 2015)
  • Text-to-Speech : Enabled
  • Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
  • X-Ray : Not Enabled
  • Language: : English
  • Simultaneous device usage : Up to 4 simultaneous devices, per publisher limits
  • ASIN : B00YY64S40
  • Lending : Not Enabled
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