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Apocalypse the Beginning: A Post-Apocalyptic Romance (The Power of Twelve Book 1) Kindle Edition
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"The intrigue held you captive and the character building and scene building were wonderful. The beginnings of the love triangle were there as well." - Amazon Reviewer
- ASIN : B082FS4N33
- Publication date : December 5, 2019
- Language: : English
- File size : 2828 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 246 pages
- Lending : Enabled
- Best Sellers Rank: #547,093 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
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No going to lie, the editing is pretty awful. And when I wasn't tripping over typos, I was cringing over really bad grammar. The plot holes are big enough to back a semi truck into. There's supposedly no electricity so they are powering the train cars by batteries that get their energy from people working the pumps. Okay, I can buy that. But then they're pulling into a new bunker and using medical lights to heal their friends. They're all living underground because of the killer locusts, but it's okay to take a train car outside to get to another bunker? And if they didn't have electricity, how did they build all these bunkers that apparently weren't there 10 years ago? The book was just riddled with these kind of inconsistencies.
I think I didn't like Aviella, but it was honestly hard to tell because there's not a lot of description or character development to be had. I don't have any idea what she looks like. She mostly came off as wishy washy with no clear defining personality traits. The guys are more of the same: 2 dimensional with no personalities.
I think this could have been really good but right now it reads like a first draft. The author needs to go back and edit this for content and grammar. I would consider rereading if she did that, but right now I probably won't continue the series and I doubt I'll read anything else by her.