- File Size: 1760 KB
- Print Length: 180 pages
- Page Numbers Source ISBN: 1947184024
- Publisher: Hostile Whispers Press, LLC; 2 edition (November 27, 2016)
- Publication Date: November 27, 2016
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B01N0KDB60
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #93,583 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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Berzerker (Twirled World Ink Book 1) Kindle Edition
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Please get an editor JM. Your storylines are too good to ruin them by not editing.
The relationship felt real: insecurities were reasonable, the build up nice, execution of the real 'beginning' of the relationship steamy, and the follow through very satisfying. I liked that Dabney played with certain tropes, but made Zerk and Landon reasonable and communicative.
I have more issues with the supporting caste: everyone seemed to be at default of 'hard truth' and 'pick at someone'. Sometimes I would forget if Lucky or Peaches or Trouble (and later Lily) were talking, as they all really seemed to be the same. I never really got a good description of anyone in the book, either. The weird names were a disconnect, too. Maybe I'm too vanilla, but all the nicknames were really odd to me. Scary, Trouble, Lucky, Berzerker.... Maybe if I had more context of why they had these names, it wouldn't be so weird. I was in the military and never had so many outlandish nicknames that wasn't just a shortening of the family name.
The good did outweigh the bad story wise, but the grammar was the real issue for me. I'll give the next book a try.
I noticed a lot of complaints about editing, and I will say that I did not purchase the books until the second, re-edited edition was published. That being said, most of the errors I saw were more the "typo" variety, rather than real grammar issues, which I find much easier to overlook. I think it's possible that Dabney uses some kind of voice-to-text software that's giving her trouble with homophones. Nonetheless, I read them all and I'm looking forward to Bull's story.
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