- File Size: 3040 KB
- Print Length: 253 pages
- Publication Date: December 22, 2017
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B078HL1BTV
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
Amazon Best Sellers Rank:
#132,568 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
- #638 in Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual & Transgender eBooks > Romance > Lesbian Romance
- #682 in Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual & Transgender eBooks > Literature & Fiction > Lesbian Fiction
- #3765 in Books > Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual & Transgender Books > Romance
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Ok...so like I said the story part of it was pretty good but the delivery and writing style was just not my cup of tea. There was too much tell...too much monolgue and inner thoughts...too much back tracking of events in the past...and not enough interaction...at least for me. The chemistry was there but telling me about it as opposed to seeing the characters talk it out or interact left me bored in reading.
Like I said, the style was not my favortie but it was free on kindleUnlimited so I can't complain too much.
I loved that they had this amazing experience; and then they are haunted by the other woman until their paths cross again. Serendipity. And then there were the exasperated and resentful emotions I had toward Harper. As much as I don't like to feel all angsty and bitter and sad in real life, I appreciate it when an author can evoke those feelings toward a character within me.
I think there were some areas that needed some work. To begin with, there was a lot of telling which I kind of just skimmed through because I didn't feel connected to it. These could have been worked into more showing, allowing me to interact and make up my own decision about how it feels.
As an example:
But if anything, Gemma was finally happy that everything was out in the open—their desire for one another, her newness at being out, and that they both wanted to continue doing what they were doing, but keep it casual.
I want to feel what Gemma is feeling instead of simply told that she is happy...how is she happy, how do we know that this is happiness for her? What about relief? Or a little hesitant about it all.
I also didn't care for was that the climax and resolution. The big kick in the gut that we all knew was coming came really late in the story and the resolution left me feeling dissatisfied...I needed more information, I wanted to be a part of Harper's growth process.
Over all, this was a good, fast paced story. Read it, let me know what you thought.