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The Biker Paperback – August 13, 2012
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This read at times like a script, as if the author was giving directions for screen set up and behavior. Tenses were at war with each other. Capitalization of description because charcters had no names only for them to be in capitalized in the next sentence.
We get no back story as to why the Biker did the things he did. The reader is left to determine that the charcter was completely amoral for no other
reason but that he was.
Misspellings abound, as does poor punctuation. Dialects were more like hill country than desert dwellers.
And at the end, the author tells us this will be continued, when there's really little to continue.
If this had not been free, I'd be righteously PO'ed to have spent money on it. A little more time editing and fleshing out the plot would've really helped. As it is, it's a big disappointment