Top critical review
not thought out completely
on November 6, 2014
Reading the first book I saw a good series being written. I enjoyed the characters, and some are "characters", the good mix of action, humor and sassy banter.
This story felt repetitive.
Maybe glossary could be included, like in Black Dagger Brotherhood series, to give general background of character and events.
Missing is the banter that kept other stories from being so gloomy ( I skimmed parts b/c I couldn't read it).
There were too many "huh?" moments that distracted me from truly enjoying this series.
1. Why did they leave Kalen alone if they knew Malik was contacting him?
2. I didn't feel like Kalen and Mac connected, didn't feel the love.
3. Previous books also has too many holes but I was hoping writing would've gotten better.
Not sure I want to purchase remaining books. Definitely going to read reviews beforehand. Especially for the price of each book.