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- Print Length: 34 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: September 27, 2014
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- Language: English
- ASIN: B00O09F3H2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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Bottled Lightning: A Short Story Kindle Edition
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The first thing I want to address is the writing of Philip Harris. He has the short story field down pat. I read this on a mini iPad and the story was a bit over thirty pages long. In that short space, I knew who, what, when, where, and how those elements fit together, as well as had a picture in my mind of the entire surrounding settings. (There were two settings at two different times). The descriptions of all these elements, as well as the actions by the people, were related seamlessly and unobtrusively as the story unfolded. When an author can build a complete picture in my mind without my being consciously aware of it, I am impressed. I don't want to read long, dry, or convoluted pages of description; I want to read what people are saying or doing. I got the whole experience in this short story as it rolled seamlessly along. Associated with this aspect of writing is how well conversations are handled. Harris nailed that, too. Written in the third person, there isn't a lot of conversation, but it fit the characters when it was used.
My other point concerns the plot/story. There is a definite plot in the story; it was straightforward and clear. I like mysteries. Something happens, the puzzles have to be solved, and the person responsible is unmasked. In Science Fiction, something happens, the puzzles are subject to the attempt of solving, but there isn't any answer at the end. That drives me nuts! I'm not imaginative. I want a start, middle, and an end. Science Fiction does not lend itself to what I want. That's why I travel there infrequently. Now that you know my frustration with this genre, I will try to address the plot. It definitely has a beginning, the middle deals with the result of the beginning, and the end, I think, is left up to me. What!? That's the best I can describe the plot; I refuse to write spoilers. It's a situation that forces the reader to make assumptions and decide how it might be resolved. The real conundrum comes with the moral issues associated with the assumptions and attitudes of the characters and reader's. Not a neat and tidy wrap up is it? I have never found neat and tidy in a well written Science Fiction short story. They haunt me for weeks, sometimes longer. If that is one of the goals of SF, it worked with me.
If you like SF, this is a great example of a well done short story. If it is not your main interest, try it anyway. I did and lived through it. Yes, I will be pondering it for some time, but I need that push every now and then. It was well done and I enjoyed reading it. Thinking about it isn't as enjoyable, but at least I will be thinking!
I want to read more of his stories.
Overall really enjoyed it. Signed up for the newsletter so I look forward to some more good reads.
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