- File Size: 2789 KB
- Print Length: 144 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Free House Studios Ltd; First Edition edition (October 29, 2014)
- Publication Date: October 29, 2014
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00P0USSEA
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
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Ben Brown's Flying Machine Kindle Edition
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The story begins right in the middle of the action. The crew of the first manned spaceship to Mars has vanished, but the CEV module that they were in crashes into a pasture on Ben Brown's farm. The CEV is not without a passenger, however, it contains an old man who is dying. Upon the old man's last breath, ancient words are spoken to Ben Brown that change his life forever.
After the crash, Ben is ridiculed by classmates after being accused of lying about the old man on the spaceship as there was no indication that a being was on the craft. Ben has to endure the backlash. But, when he takes his SAT exam shortly thereafter, he gets a perfect score on the test. This changes the direction of his life as he is taken under the wing of Dr. Bradshaw and given a full scholarship to college.
As the story proceeds, Ben finds that he now has knowledge of things he did not know before his encounter with the spaceship and the old man. Ben can now understand cuneiform and complex scientific theories. With this new found knowledge, Ben is compelled to build a "flying machine" and enters the device into a science fair. His contraption brings him fame and fortune, but Ben soon discovers that the machine is part of a bigger plan for him to fly to another planet - the planet where the old man in the CEV came from - and to find out what really happened to the crew of the CEV.
For a short read, this was entertaining, exciting and definitely worth the price of admission. I can ultimately see it as a movie and would love to see it on the big screen.
Well done, Mr. Thorp.
When the authorities question Ben, he finds that he can suddenly write in an ancient cuneiform alphabet. In fact, Ben racks up a perfect SAT test in the ancient language, which of course alerts the experts who quiz Ben on star patterns and mathematical equations.
With his new knowledge, Ben builds a sled that works on a new and innovative type of propulsion and flies over his town. When his friend, Maryanne sees the sled, she suggests that Ben enter his invention in the national high school contest to win both the prize money and national recognition.
Written for young teens, Ben Brown’s Flying Machine is both inventive and entertaining. Michael Thorp has written an original novel that except for the violence of the Nefilim world Ben takes his space ship to, this book is suitable for young teens. Thorp is a polished writer with imagination to spare. Working on developing his characters more, giving them some human flaws could push his writing up the level of a bestseller.
Some literary delights promise it all! Action, adventure, spirituality, deep characterization, coming-of-age, science fiction, this week’s meal seeks to deliver all of that and more to its readers. It’s a tall order for any book to deliver on, but it’s far from impossible! Let us break out the forks and knives to cut into this layer cake of story and find out!
Before we cut in, let’s recite the Starving Review creed:
I attempt to rate every book from the perspective of a fan of the genre
I attempt to make every review as spoiler-free as possible.
There is some good, quality cooking here so, before I pull out the really sharp knives, let’s delve into these positive flavors first. We really have to look at Ben Brown as three distinct pieces, because it honestly feels like three different books (more on this below). If you look at each of these segments, they seem to be solid pieces on their own. The first segment has a wonderful, science fiction/fairy tale feel. The second segment makes for an interesting, if badly paced, alien adventure akin to Stargate, and the last segment is a surprisingly stark take on alien invasions, with a large dollop of Independence Day.
Though very, very roughly sketched-out, there’s nothing wrong with the characterization of the story. However, that being said, there’s not much done right, as all the characters feel very flat. We learn little about any of them, even the titular Ben Brown himself, outside of a few choice bits of characterization. Yes, what is shown to us is flavorful, but there is not much substance to the tastes. I believe Mr. Thorp’s intent is to let the character’s actions speak entirely for them, offering little internal insights to even the PoV characters, and that is admirable. However, there isn’t enough of it in such a short work to rely on that, especially with the expanse of scope and the rapid shifts of setting and tone.
Let’s tackle the biggest issue: the layer cake set-up of the plot. There are three distinct layers of this cake, three distinct plot sections. Each one has a substantial shift in tone, pacing, and plot. Though they all follow one after the other to make the final recipe, each layer really feels like it should have been its own novel. Again, this is a fairly short work, so each separate leg of the overall adventure feels extremely rushed and hard to follow because of that horrible pacing.
What complicates this even more is the chef’s decision to add extra spice to some parts of the story while skimping on others. There are some dense chunks of technical exposition in places, or intense focus on a character’s specific actions in a routine or technical section, while the creamy, flavorful bits of character development and, especially, world building in the later sections is left sparse and thin. For a treat intended for young adults, focusing vital scenes on the technical jargon and extensive use of acronyms and specific terms, even if they are real-world ones, instead of the characters, world building, and action do not help.
The last critical issue I found in the recipe is the problematic foreshadowing. There are elements that come up that literally are smacked into the reader’s face. Sudden reveals, vital plot points that come up only in hindsight, and the like leave for jarring transitions and head-scratching moments. Some of these are very scantly foreshadowed. Most don’t even have a hint of flavor in the mix before they come out in the recipe. It’s all right, certainly, to have some secrets to reveal. The problem is that if there is no hint at all, no foreshadowing, not even a hint of a reveal to come, especially when it is something the PoV character knows all about ahead of time, it makes the entire situation very jarring on the readers, stretching the bounds of disbelief to the snapping point.
So, to put it all together, Ben Brown’s Flying Machine promises a vast variety of flavors and delivers, but only in very small portions with jarring changes at every turn. There is some real promise in this book, but it really needs a few more revisions and, hopefully, a split into three books, with each major story section properly expanded to do them justice.
FINAL VERDICT: ** (A vast variety of flavors, but only in very small portions with jarring, puzzling changes at every turn!)
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