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Call of the Herald: Young Adult Epic Fantasy (The Dawning of Power trilogy Book 1) by [Rathbone, Brian]
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About the Author

As a teen, Brian Rathbone had a hunger for Young Adult Fantasy and Epic Fantasy that could not be satisfied. He would hide out in his secret reading place for weeks and perch on his choice of straw bale thrones. It was a spiritual and sometimes emotional journey filled with thieves, wizards and dragons.


Years later, he channeled that passion to create The World of Godsland YA fantasy series, which also includes multiple free young adult books. Call of the Herald, the series starter, is one such Kindle freebie.

Rathbone gives away many of his Young Adult books for free in order to let readers sample his work at no risk to them and so those without a large reading budget can enjoy an epic adventure.

Brian's books are inspired by many of his favorite tales from JRR Tolkien, CS Lewis, JK Rowling and George R R Martin. His journey as an independent author has largely been influenced by writers like Joseph Lallo, Scott Sigler, MR Mathias, Jeff Wheeler and Nathan Lowell.

Product Details

  • File Size: 2162 KB
  • Print Length: 243 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publisher: White Wolf Press, LLC (August 17, 2010)
  • Publication Date: August 17, 2010
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B003ZUYQCA
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  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #4,042 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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I found this book hard to get into at first. The writing just seemed amateurish at best and it seemed like it was taking a long time to get into the meat of the story. But, I gave it a chance and I'm glad I did. When the story started to the unfold, it seemed like the quality of writing also picked up. It's not perfect by any means. The writing isn't entirely consistent in quality and the story sometimes needs to be reined in, but overall it's an interesting read. I'm looking forward to reading the next two installments.
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The coming of age plot where a youngster - here the teenager Catrin -- discovers magic powers just in time to save the world, isn't new. However, it is an appealing plot line and Rathbone's characters are sweet too. The evil guys are not gory, the unusual alliances are interesting and the landscape is skillfully drawn.
So, I'll consider the next book if its not too expensive.
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By Jo Lane on August 26, 2012
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While the idea for this story was a decent one, the novel as a whole could have been MUCH better.

The plot is hard to follow. Rathbone doesn't build up the setting enough - the reader is dropped into a world he/she knows nothing about.

The author also gives information randomly, tossing in bits and pieces of detail that has nothing to do with the previous or following sentences. Then there's the problem of giving TOO much information, which drags the story out (e.x.: "...permitting his unconscious mind -- rather than his conscious mind -- guide the way." Obviously if it's unconscious mind, it's not going to be his conscious mind.)He also tells us rather than shows us, which is a personal pet peeve of mine, as well as of language arts teachers everywhere.

Rathbone strings things together that don't make sense: "Leaping over the hedge, Nat moved with confidence and purpose, suddenly trusting his instincts more than his senses. For the first time in a very long time, he believed not only in his father, but also in himself." When you read that entire section of the chapter, the second sentence doesn't connect to anything. Why? Why does he suddenly believe in himself? We don't know because the author doesn't show us.

There is also the problem of overly wordy dialogue: "'Ah, Cat. I wish none of this were happening. You've certainly done nothing to deserve what those sons of jackals just said. Don't take their words into your heart, dear one. They are just scared, confused, and looking for someone to blame. I'll take care of them; don't you worry. Come along now. We've horses to tend, and I need to make a trip to the cold caves this afternoon,' he said..." Much of this dialogue is useless as well as stilted.
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This fantasy, while having a few points of interest, is pretty much unoriginal in the basic plotline: girl discovers her wondrous magical powers and goes with a few companions (most of them simply for comic relief) to save the world. I've read many, many fantasy books, and Rathborne's trite treatment of "magic" is something I've already heard before, from better books. The action tends to be rather slow, and didn't grip me as much as other fantasy books, say Eragon. The only moment that caught me was when Catrin was pushed off of the cliff - I thought that was kind of cool.

The writing is a very very easy read... so easy it's almost sickening. The characters are not developed and I felt no sympathy or relathionhip with any of them, except maybe Chase. The book has to makings of a good story, but needs to be treated with a more mature style of writing, greater character development, and less talk more speed. As a reader of great fantasy books, including the Lord of the Rings, I find the comparisions of this book to LOTR highly undeserved.
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Legend says that a Herald will be born who will save the land of Godfist from invaders. This Herald will fight for their freedom. To some it is only a legend but to others it is a prophecy, waiting to be fulfilled. The Zjhon are ancient enemies and are planning an attack but no one takes heed of these warnings until it is too late. Now it is up to the Herald to save them. The question is... will the Herald realize her destiny in time to save Godfist?

But that's not all...the Zjhon believe in the prophecy and have given the order to search for the Herald and do away with her. This is an intriguing fantasy and is hard to put down. The description of scenery is so well written that I could imagine it in my mind. The characters are believable and well developed. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The Dawning of Power is a trilogy, which includes Call of the Herald, Inherited Danger, and Dragon Ore. I would recommend this book for all ages.

Written by Linda Weaver Clarke, author of the new mystery series "The Adventures of John and Julia Evans."
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Call to the Herald is a short novel introducing the first Godsland trilogy. Godsland is entering an age of prophecy where nations must come accept or fight their destiny. Catrin, a young farm girl, is beginning to demonstrate unusual powers while the Zjhon Empire is plotting to invade her homeland, Godsfist. Conventional coming of age story line follows with Catrin maturing and growing into her destiny.

I had difficulty keeping interest in this book since it felt too much like a rushed introduction with too many points of view and too many balls in the air for such a short novel. Primary focus was on character and world building while plot was not adequately clarified. I have "bought" (available as a free download) the second book in the series, I will start to read it but I am not fully committed to finishing it. My primary dissatisfaction with series so far is that there is inadequate understanding of the underlying nature of the conflict and the prophecies driving the conflict. I understand that it is too early in the series to show all of the cards but still more is needed to be shown to keep my interest. If early parts of the second book show enough plot details and plot progression to keep my interest then I will likely finish the series - otherwise I will drop it.

This is the first book in the debut Godsland trilogy, The Dawning of Power trilogy, which was available for free download when I "bought" it. Next books in trilogy are Inherited Danger (Godsland Series: Book Two) (currently available for free download) and
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