- File Size: 1737 KB
- Print Length: 283 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: April 12, 2017
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B071Y7QXNQ
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #61,809 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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I was glad to see that every sentence didn't start with "she said" or "she did" and that the author knows how to use long sentences.
I did have a little trouble understanding how an investigator who was supposed to be so awesome at her job could do so many stupid things. If you're going to make a strong, kick ass character, then make her so. I also found her to be a little sexist...wondering if her new girl liked looking at pics of sexy, almost porn women. Really?
First book I have enjoyed in a long time.
Story was great however, I think this should have been in general fiction. Did the author forget the genre. Positively lacking in the sex department. But seriously, a sweet story. If you are looking for a sexless novel, you will love this one.
The characters are believable and likeable, even with their flaws, which add to the story. The conclusion was satisfying and could lead to another chapter in the series of the lives of Robbie and Jordy. I hope it does.
I read the Kindle version, and I don't know how this works, whether these things are easily fixed, but the book was riddled - RIDDLED - with errors. Spelling errors ("leach" when the author meant "letch"), many instances of this kind of error. "Cubical" instead of "cubicle", and errors in continuity: "And I got to have my own room with a beautiful pink canopy bed". "Aw I bet you looked sweet in your little pink canopy bed", I teased. "How did you know it was pink?" she asked. These lines were written in sequence. "You know, after what we've learn today, so am I," Jordy said. (Should be "learned".) There were several errors like this one.
The author needs a completely fresh set of eyes to read the final product before publishing. These errors would have been/should have been caught.
All in all, the story was great. The errors lost me a bit, but I wanted to know how the story would be resolved.
The author did a wonderful job telling this story.
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