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Dane (The MacKenzie Family Book 1) by [Hart, Liliana]
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Length: 41 pages Word Wise: Enabled Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
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  • File Size: 1302 KB
  • Print Length: 41 pages
  • Publisher: 7th Press, LLC (January 1, 2014)
  • Publication Date: January 1, 2014
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B005C5YZ86
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I picked this very short ebook up free, so didn't have much expectations. I thought the writing was good, and I would read more by this author. My only beef is this story moved at such a fast pace! It had potential, including (what could be) a great cast of characters for a series, but over all it was too short to care about the characters. So much was left unsaid and unaddressed. BUT, since this appears to be a teaser for a series, we may get those answers in later books.
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The author wants us to believe that a woman who has raised her son alone for 9 years, because Dad left town. Who has the smarts to run her own business, and run her father's farm, is dumb enough to falls right back in Dane's arms within minutes. It reads like maybe 5 minutes had passed before she is not only having sex with Dane but unprotected sex at that! Please...no women with any self-respect would do that. All Dane needs to do is bang her a few times says he is sorry and that is that?! What a crock! Don't waste your time on this book.
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The description of this "book" talks about a woman who was left heartbroken, alone and pregnant. She will never forgive the man
Who left her this way. Five minutes after a chance encounter they are having steamy sex in a garage!
No plot or character development. Penthouse Forum is far more believable. Oh, the book cover does deserve 5 stars!
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Everything about this "book" bothers me. I realize that most romance novels and erotica succumb to purple prose, but if you're going to go on about a character's physical features and use cliched phrases, at least make it consistent. Hart makes a reference to a character's "cobalt eyes" (purple prose and cliched) but then only pages later refers to them as grey eyes. Call me crazy, but I don't think cobalt and grey are the same color. Beyond that, Charlie's character is a frickin' idiot. Someone who got pregnant and then left, and was supposedly emotionally scarred by the event, does NOT sleep with said impregnator the second she sees him again without even a blip of a thought of using a condom and not getting pregnant again. The sex was even boring, I skipped over most of it in a rush to just finish the book and get it off my kindle.

Yes, this was a free ebook. Yes, it was advertised as an erotic romance. All I'm asking for is a little quality! (And also better editors).
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This is a book written solely for the sex, I get that there are a lot of people who really like that so that's not the issue I have with this book. It's just that the sexy scenes weren't sexy and there is just a suspension of disbelief that I just couldn't attain. I mean I GUESS I can see jumping the bones of the guy who left you broken-hearted and pregnant (even though he didn't know about it) as soon as you see him, even though you just tried to maim him. I can understand the guy being all hot and bothered by her but when the guy finds out this big secret and he just is all, whatever, I'm here now wish I knew before, now let's go have sex. That's weird, a guy is either going to be super pissed or scared off by Charlotte's deceit. THEN, THEN oh hey we've been apart for 10 years, let's get hitched....really because in 10 years you don't think either of you have changed at all?!? Ok, this is a book about the sex not the story, but really both aspects are pretty lacking...but I guess it was free...so...
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This short story tells of the homecoming of bad boy Dane and the less than warm welcome given by his old childhood sweetheart, Charloette. But who could blame her? Dane left her abruptly without a word, and worse still, with a baby he did not know about...

One may puzzle over why if Dane loved Charloette as much as he did, he would hook up with other females in the interim and he never tried to contact her. But bam, when he meets her, he wants her again. Alas, the fickle nature of a man's heart. If you can suspend your disbelief over this change of attitude, this book makes a quick, easy read.
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Dane by Liliana Hart was my first introduction to this author. After reading this short story, I plan to put put the other books I own by Hart at the top of my TBR list. Dane is a hot, sexy, short story and the first book in her MacKenzie Family series.

Dane returns home after ten years away learning that things are quite different. Not expecting to find his first love in town since his brothers all said she moved away months after he left, his first night in town is quite amazing. Dane is the last person Charlotte expects to find in her shop but doesn't waste any time making up for all the years she lost with him. Seeing him is bitter sweet. He is the only one she has ever loved.

The story is very quick and there isn't a lot of time for buildup or getting to really know the characters, however, I felt it was an enjoyable read none the less. Normally I would like more to the story and characters, but this free story was enough to whet my appetite for Hart's writing. Her writing is very easy to follow and I found myself flipping through the pages.

Hart also sets up future stories well with the introduction of Dane's brothers Cooper, Thomas and Riley. I look forward to reading about all of them! If you like sexy reunion stories, give this hot little one a try.
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