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There's a nice mix of psychological fear, mainly that of becoming insane, and pure supernatural terror. It is no spoiler to say that something is indeed after Gillian and Meg yet the added-on trauma of being unable to know if it is real is played nicely here. A Debt to be Paid is a solid horror story that delivers solid scares and terror. There is also good interplay between mother and daughter as they struggle with their love but also feels betrayed by the other. An interesting social analogy appears in the story. Both mother and daughter are lured into danger by a letter promising financial help but delivering terror and uncertainty. Whom among us have not been lured into an offer too good to be true but ended up in a quagmire they regretted? The author just takes this dilemma one more step into the weird and supernatural. For a short novella, Patrick Lacey has a lot going here and proves he has the chops to scare in a way that stays with us.
This story was first released as an ebook in 2015. But in this 2017 Kindle and paperback re-release, Lacey has added three short stories. They are all worth reading even though A Debt to be Paid remains the highlight. "In on It" suffers from being a bit too much like the title work. It features a man who, probably reading too much David Icke, sees the shape of a lizard inside a local politician. Again we have the theme of delusion vs reality except here the focus is on his friend Lisa who starts to believe he may be right. It is still a great story even if the ending left me a bit hanging. "The Lynnwood Vampires" is back with full steam ahead. A schoolteacher starts questioning his daughter's choice in boy friends amidst a surge of Goth-like teens at the school where he teach. Here again we have a nice mix of a fear many parents go through and a creepy horror ascending on the town. It becomes the fear of all parents tripled.
Lastly, we have "The Barry Effect" which feels like a cross between The Twilight Zone and Harlan Ellison's "Shatterday". It is the second best story in the collection and the most quietly horrific of the bunch. John goes to his high school reunion to meet his old school bunch but is met by quizzical faces when he asks them why Barry isn't there. None of them remember Barry. From that simple premise the author kicks it up a notch into high anxiety. It's a nicely structured short story that holds onto you.
All four stories are quite good and shows off Lacey's considerable storytelling skills. Yet it is the title novella that is the clincher and is most likely to make you nervous when your phone rings or when you get that quick and easy loan application in the mail. Good scares and quality reading.
The novella, “A Debt to Be Paid: A Novella of Creature Horror” is what it says on the tin. A young woman, Meg Foster, with a family history of schizophrenia is worried when she encounters the horrors her estranged mother saw. Her mentally ill mother, Gillian, abducted Meg to keep her safe from some creepypasta-esque monsters she thinks are stalking her. The novella includes chapters about Meg in the present day, as well as flashback chapters of Gillian when Meg was a young child. The themes of mental illness, the fluid experience of reality, and family are woven through the novella, which justifies its length in a piece of fiction that would otherwise work better as a short story about monsters told at a slumber party. The author does a good job with characterization, particularly with Meg.
The second piece in the collection is the short story “In on It.” This story shares some of the themes of the lead novella, but from a slightly different angle.
“The Lynnwood Vampires,” the third piece, is actually my favorite in the collection. Again, family—the trouble it causes us and what we must do to keep it together—is a major theme. Readers that are or were parents of teenagers will connect to this story of teen fads and bad boyfriends.
The final story, “The Barry Effect,” is nice piece of Dark Fantasy that might have appeared on The Twilight Zone or Night Gallery. A man reconnects to his school friends at his high school reunion and learns that you can never really go home again.
The writing is a little rough in a few patches, but delivers the chills you want when you buy a book like this. I am looking forward to reading more from Patrick Lacey soon.