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"Celebrated storyteller Gaelen Foley brings her craft to new heights with Devil Takes a Bride," the seductive tale of a man bent on revenge and the beauty who teaches him to love again. . . .
In the quiet English countryside, far from the intrigues of London, Lizzie Carlisle slowly mends her broken heart, devoting herself to her new position as lady's companion to the Dowager Viscountess Strathmore-- until her peaceful life is turned upside down by a visit from "Devil" Strathmore, the old woman's untamed nephew--a dangerously handsome man whose wicked reputation hides a tortured soul.
Devlin Kimball, Lord Strathmore, has spent years adventuring on the high seas, struggling to make his peace with the tragedy that claimed the lives of his family. But now he has uncovered the dark truth behind the so-called accident and swears retribution. He has no intention of taking a bride--until his eccentric aunt's will forces he and Lizzie together, and Devlin finds his path to vengeance blocked by the stubborn but oh-so-tempting Miss Carlisle. Her passionate nature rivals his own. But disillusioned once by love, Lizzie will accept nothing less than his true devotion. . . . --This text refers to the hardcover edition.
In the quiet English countryside, far from the intrigues of London, Lizzie Carlisle slowly mends her broken heart, devoting herself to her new position as lady's companion to the Dowager Viscountess Strathmore-- until her peaceful life is turned upside down by a visit from "Devil" Strathmore, the old woman's untamed nephew--a dangerously handsome man whose wicked reputation hides a tortured soul.
Devlin Kimball, Lord Strathmore, has spent years adventuring on the high seas, struggling to make his peace with the tragedy that claimed the lives of his family. But now he has uncovered the dark truth behind the so-called accident and swears retribution. He has no intention of taking a bride--until his eccentric aunt's will forces he and Lizzie together, and Devlin finds his path to vengeance blocked by the stubborn but oh-so-tempting Miss Carlisle. Her passionate nature rivals his own. But disillusioned once by love, Lizzie will accept nothing less than his true devotion. . . . --This text refers to the hardcover edition.
From Publishers Weekly
Lizzie Carlisle, the heroine of Foley's fifth Knight family Regency (after Lady of Desire), possesses a sly, stubborn streak that quickly endears her to the reader, as well as to Devlin "Devil" Strathmore. As a companion to elderly Lady Augusta Strathmore, Lizzie pens a note to Devil implying that his lonely aunt is near death in order to get the notorious rake to visit. Angry at the deception but intrigued by Lizzie's wit and candor, Devil tries to seduce the bluestocking, but he forces himself to leave when he realizes that he could fall in love with her. Love would complicate Devil's plan to seek revenge against the aristocratic rogues who murdered his family 12 years earlier. The rogues, all members of the infamous Horse and Chariot Club, have almost accepted Devlin into their group, but when his aunt dies, he finds himself in a curious position: he must marry Lizzie to inherit his aunt's vast fortune. The gentle sparring that ensues between the two is amusing, and their tantalizingly brief sexual interludes will stoke readers' hunger for more. In this entertaining, if somewhat melodramatic, tale, Foley manages to do what few authors have-write a truly sensual romance, possessing depth of plot and character, that isn't overburdened by sex scenes.
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Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved. --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
About the Author
A Pennsylvania native, Gaelen Foley holds a B.A. in English literature from S.U.N.Y. College at Fredonia. It was while studying the Romantic poets, such as Wordsworth, Byron, and Shelley, that she first became interested in the Regency period, in which her novels are set. After college, she moonlighted as a waitress for five years to keep her daylight hours free for writing and honing her craft. Her dedication paid off in 1998 when Ballantine published her first novel, The Pirate Prince, which went on to win the Romantic Times Reviewers Choice Award for Best First Historical Romance. Since then, her books have won the National Readers’ Choice Award, the Bookseller’s Best Award, the Colorado Award of Excellence, the Beacon, and for two years running, the esteemed Golden Leaf.
Foley lives in Pittsburgh with her husband, Eric, and two spoiled bichons frises. She is hard at work on her next book in the Knight family series. Readers can write to her at P.O. Box 522, South Park, PA, 15129, or visit her on the Web at www.gaelenfoley.com. --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
Foley lives in Pittsburgh with her husband, Eric, and two spoiled bichons frises. She is hard at work on her next book in the Knight family series. Readers can write to her at P.O. Box 522, South Park, PA, 15129, or visit her on the Web at www.gaelenfoley.com. --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
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Chapter One
London, 1817
The fanciful cupola-topped pavilion languished in desolation on the frozen marshes south of the Thames, a gaudy ruin, with a gray February sleet blowing against its rusty, fake turrets and boarded-up windows. Some said the place was haunted. Others claimed it was cursed. All that His Lordship’s unassuming little man-of-business knew, however, was that if his glamorous patron did not soon arrive, he was sure to catch his death in this weather.
Clutching his umbrella over his head, Charles Beecham, Esquire, stood wrapped in his brown wool greatcoat, his beaver hat pulled low over his receding hairline, and a look of abject misery on his face. He sneezed abruptly into his handkerchief.
“God bless ye.” Mr. Dalloway, standing nearby, slid him a greasy grin.
“Thank you,” Charles clipped out before turning away from the unkempt property agent with a respectable humph.
Dalloway was the opposition in this matter, determined to bilk His Lordship out of three thousand pounds for the dubious privilege of owning the godforsaken place. Charles meant to advise his patron against the purchase in the strongest possible terms, not the least because it would fall to him to explain the mad expenditure to old Lady Ironsides. Stealing another discreet glance at his fob watch, he pursed his lips. Late.
Alas, his staid life as the Strathmore family’s solicitor had become alarmingly interesting since His Lordship’s return from his high adventures on the seven seas and elsewhere.
Though barely thirty, the viscount had done the sorts of things Charles preferred to read about from the safety of his favorite armchair. Her Ladyship had oft regaled Charles with tales of her dashing nephew’s exploits: battling pirates, chasing down slave ships, living with savages, fending off mountain lions, surveying temples in the wilds of Malaysia, crossing deserts with the nomad caravans of Kandahar. Charles had thought them a lot of cock-and-bull tales until he’d met the man. What on earth could he want with this place? he wondered, then rehearsed a diplomatic warning in his head: This, my lord, is precisely the sort of rash adventure that drove your uncle into dun territory. . . .
Ah, but thinking a thing and saying it to Devil Strathmore were two different matters entirely.
Just then, a drumming sound approached from behind the wintry shroud of pewter fog and needling rain, like thunder rumbling in the distance. Barely discernible at first, it swiftly formed into the deep, recognizable rhythm of pounding hoofbeats.
At last. Charles stared in the direction of the plea- sure grounds’ great iron gates. The ominous cadence grew louder—driving, relentless—reverberating across the marshes, until it shook the earth. Suddenly, a large black coach hurtled out of the indistinguishable gray, barreling up the graveled drive that offered the only safe course through the boggy waste.
The quartet of fine, jet-black horses moved like liquid night, their hooves striking sure over the mud and ice, steam puffing from their nostrils. Stationed fore and aft on the shiny body of the coach, His Lordship’s driver, groom, and two footmen stared straight ahead, impervious to the weather. They were clad in traditional Strathmore livery, a sedate dun color with smart black piping, stiff felt tricornes on their heads, and frothy, white lace jabots at their throats.
Charles looked askance at his opponent as Mr. Dalloway ambled down from his shelter atop the flamboyant curved steps of the pavilion. His wily stare was fixed on the approaching vehicle. Noting the gleam of greed in Dalloway’s eyes, Charles fretted with the unhappy premonition that his rival would win the day, and then what on earth would he tell Her Ladyship? He could only cork his terror at the thought of the formidable dowager’s displeasure by reminding himself of her stern orders seven months ago, upon her nephew’s return to London.
“Send all of Devlin’s bills to me,” the old dragon had instructed in no uncertain terms. When Charles had tactfully questioned the command, seeking only to pro- tect the elderly woman, Her Ladyship had pooh-poohed his hesitancy. “It is enough that he has come home at last, Charles. My handsome nephew must cut a dash in Town! You will send his bills to me.”
And so, obediently, Charles had.
His Lordship’s bills, like a flock of ink-smudged doves, had winged their way to the dowager’s elegant villa in the Bath countryside: the handsome house on Portman Street and all its elegant furnishings, Aubusson carpets, French damask drapes, Classical paintings and nude marble statues; the wine cellar; the staff’s wages; the coach, the drag, the curricle; the horses; the clothes; the boots; the club dues for White’s and Brooke’s; the opera box, the parties, the jewels for himself and a number of unnamed women; even the IOU’s from a few unlucky hands at the gaming tables. Dear old Aunt Augusta had paid them all without a peep. But three thousand quid for an old, abandoned pleasure-ground? It seemed excessive even for him.
As his coachman pulled the team to a halt in front of the pavilion, Charles swallowed hard, his heart beating faster. The footmen jumped down from their post in back of the coach and marched forward like soulless clockwork automata, one opening the carriage door, the other producing an umbrella, which he held at the ready. Dalloway cast Charles a nervous glance, no longer looking quite so cocky.
“You haven’t met His Lordship yet, have you?” Charles murmured under his breath, feeling a trifle smug.
Dalloway did not answer. He looked again at the coach, where the footman knocked down the folding metal steps and then held the door, staring forward in stone-faced efficiency.
The first person to climb out of the coach was the amiable Bennett Freeman, a neatly dressed, young black man from America who served as His Lordship’s gentleman’s gentleman, had followed him on his journeys around the globe, and attended the viscount in much of his day-to-day business. Behind his wire-rimmed spectacles, Mr. Freeman’s intelligent brown eyes scanned the bizarre location with a perplexed glance, but when he saw Charles, he waved affably and dashed toward the pavilion to escape the weather.
Next, a dainty, gloved hand emerged from the carriage, accepting the footman’s assistance. Charles sneezed again as His Lordship’s latest elegant ladybird stepped down from the coach and minced toward the stairs, teetering over the mud on her high metal pattens. It was not her clothes but her mercenary eyes and wiggly walk that gave away her profession—these days the top courtesans dressed as fine as the ton’s best hostesses. She wore a tight spencer of maroon velvet and held up her skirts with one gloved hand, while with the other, she tried to shield her magnificent hat with its clutch of ostrich plumes from the steady drizzle.
Gentleman enough to show chivalry even to her sort, Charles hurried over and gave the high-priced harlot his umbrella.
“Oh, thank you, sir,” she responded in a breathy purr.
Dalloway eagerly assisted the hussy in going up the wet stairs.
Last of all came Devil Strathmore.
The footman with the umbrella had to hold his arm higher in order to shelter his towering master from the weather. His Lordship slid out of the coach with a sinuous motion, then paused to adjust the fur-trimmed greatcoat of luxurious black wool that hung carelessly from his massive shoulders and draped his powerful frame. Small, tinted spectacles shaded his eyes from the flat, gray glare of afternoon; he wore his long, raven hair tied back in a silky queue. A small gold hoop adorned his left earlobe. Eccentricity, after all, ran in his family, as did his Irish good looks. His skin was still coppered from that desert he had crossed months ago, but his lazy grin when he caught sight of his loyal family retainer flashed like the white cliffs of Dover.
There was no helping it. Even to a middle-aged fuddy-duddy like Charles, that smile, when Devil Strathmore doled it out, could make a person stand up taller. He looked every inch the hardened, worldly roué—and he was no man to cross, to be sure—but if he liked you, there was a warmth in him that no one could resist.
“Charles, good to see you.” Lord Strathmore strutted toward him with long-legged, confident strides, the umbrella-holding footman hurrying to keep up.
“My lord.” Charles winced at his hearty handshake and nearly tripped forward when the big man clapped him on the back.
He swept an elegant gesture toward the building. “Shall we?”
“Yes, of course, my lord. B-but, first I really must say—”
“Problem, Charles?” He took off his tinted spectacles and stared down at him for a moment with pale, wolf- like eyes.
Charles looked into that fathomless gaze and saw traces of the wilderness still lingering there: leafy shadows; blue vistas; deep, dark canyons. He gulped. “N-no, of course, my lord, no problem. It’s just, well, it’s a terrible expense, don’t you see.” He faltered, seeing he was having no effect. “That is to say, I am not entirely sure Her Ladyship would approve.”
Dev paused, studying him.
As an ardent student of human nature, he appreciated the courage, indeed, the loyalty it took his little solicitor to stand up to him. He truly did. All the same, in this matter, he would brook no denial. Explaining his true motives was out of the question, of course. It seemed he was just going to have to brazen it out and insist on having his way because—well, because he was Devil Strathmore and had always done exactly what he liked.
He slipped Charles one of his most charming smiles and tucked his spectacles inside his breast pocket. “Don’t be daft, Charles. Aunt Augusta thinks I hung the moon.” He turned and jogged up the stairs.
“Well, that is true—” Charles hastened to follow. “But perhaps I could explain it better to her if it would please Your Lordship to inform me wh-why you wish to buy this place?”
Dev laughed. “Why, for the same reason I do everything: because it amuses me. Come, come, Charles, don’t be a killjoy. Let’s have a look.”
“But, sir—she’ll have my head for this!”
“Charles.” He stopped, turned, and sighed, then affectionately fixed the little man’s lapels. “Dear, dear, Charles. Neat, tidy Charles. Very well, I shall tell you what’s afoot, but I am taking you into strictest confidence. Understood?”
“Sir!” His eyes widened at this spectacular show of favor. “Of course, my lord. You have my word a-as a gentleman.”
“Capital.” Dev grasped his shoulder and pulled him nearer, staring firmly at him. “Now, then.” He bent his head toward the shorter man and lowered his voice. “Have you ever heard, Charles, of the Horse and Chariot Driving Club?”
Charles’s eyes widened in scandalized innocence. “Sir!” he breathed.
“Quite,” Dev replied. “You know how I enjoy the sport of driving.”
“Y-yes, sir. The curricle, the racing drag, your silver stallion—”
“Precisely. Well, there are a few . . . shall we say, requirements for entrée into the club, you see.” He ticked them off on his fingers. “First, a prospective member must be of good birth, have no morals and a great deal of money.”
“But—you don’t, sir.”
Dev laughed without humor. “Not yet, of course, but it’s the same as if I did.”
Indeed, he was counting on his aunt’s fortune as critical to his success. Gambling, for example, was how he had gotten close to his targets in the first place, for such sharpers as the boys of the Horse and Chariot Club could always use another deep player to round out the whist table. Curious—the more he lost without complaint, the more the blackguards seemed to enjoy his company. But let them win for now, he thought. Soon, they would lose everything.
Including their lives.
“The second requirement an aspiring member must fulfill is to show his respect by presenting the brotherhood with a suitable gift. This—” Dev glanced around at the building, then gave Charles a conspiratorial wink. “—will knock ’em off their bloody feet.”
At least it would when he had packed the floor with explosives.
“I’ve heard there’s a third requirement,” he added breezily, “but so far, I’ve been unable to find out what it is.” “Yes, but sir—the Horse and Chariot!” Charles whispered in dread. “Everyone knows—well, you have been away from Town all these years—perhaps you have not heard—?”
To Dev’s amusement, his little lawyer glanced from side to side, as though Damage Randall, Blood Staines, or that elegant pervert, Carstairs, might be lurking nearby.
“They are a very bad sort, sir. Very bad. Duels— unspeakable things! I am quite sure your aunt would not at all approve. Not at all!”
“Well, Charles, you may be right, but as I said, I do love the sport. A true aficionado of the four-in-hand is prepared to overlook such things. Don’t you agree? I’m so glad you gave me your word not to mention this to old Lady Ironsides. Shall we?” Dev cast him a silky smile.
“Oh, dear,” Charles said under his breath, hurrying after him as Dev continued up the stairs. “Very well, but do please take care not to appear too eager in front of this Dalloway creature, my lord. He is a low, sly thing.”
Having traded guns, camels, and spices with the Bedouin caravans in Marrakech, possibly the shrewdest hagglers in the world, he trusted he could manage one ill-groomed Cockney property agent, but Dev hid his amusement and bowed to his solicitor with princely grace. It was the man’s loyalty that mattered, after all. “Thank you, Charles. I stand duly advised.”
Mollified by his acknowledgment, Charles followed him into the building without further fussing. Introductions were quickly exchanged, and in short order, they embarked with Mr. Dalloway on their tour of the pavilion.
Leaving the octagonal foyer with its red-painted ceiling, tainted mirrors, and touches of chipped gilt, they went through a pair of large, ornately carved doors that looked like the product of some opium eater’s fevered fancy. The whole place had an eerie, almost sinister air of intoxication and decay; the lingering odor of stale beer rose up in a fog from the worm-eaten floorboards and mingled with the general musty smell.
As they moved away from the foyer, the gray daylight shaded into darkness, for the windows were all boarded over. Dev’s two footmen carried candles for their party, as did Mr. Dalloway. They ventured deeper into the gloom, the floors creaking like tortured ghosts. One could almost hear the phantom echoes of forgotten laughter; spiders went scuttling across the walls. Even inside, the place was cold enough to cloud their breath.
The blonde shrieked and huddled close to Dev when something swooped over their heads. Lifting the candles higher, they soon discovered the colonies of bats and house martins that had gotten in through one of the chimneys.
In the main corridor, the flickering flames of their candelabra revealed tall columns painted like candy canes, a grimy parquet floor laid out in a dizzying zigzag design. Brightly colored, swirling murals flowed fantastically across the walls. Interior doors led to shadowed galleries and a dozen garish salons. There was even a ballroom with an elevated stand for an orchestra.
“God, it’s hideous,” Ben declared, turning to him.
“Deliciously so,” Dev purred too low for Dalloway to hear. He sent his trusty valet and friend a devilish glance. “It’s perfect.” The twisted lads of the Horse and Chariot would love it. The perfect setting in which to lull their senses so he could move closer to the answers he so desperately craved.
Ben frowned, but Dalloway kept up his lively soliloquy, ignoring the rotting floorboards, the decade’s worth of cobwebs hanging from the lightless chandelier, and the little cascades trickling down here and there where the tin roof leaked.
Charles wiped a chilly droplet off his forehead, his lips pursed in distaste, but Dev saw that his solicitor had been right about the property agent. Dalloway was as slick as oil and cheerful as a rat atop a garbage pile as he led them through the place, extolling its supposed virtues.
“The main pavilion in which we now stand encompasses eleven thousand square feet, with extensive kitchen facilities suitable for feedin’ an army. Mind your step, miss. Here’s the stairs. Ye must see the rooms above. . . .”
On the upper floor, themed chambers led off the main corridor. One was made like a jungle; the Egypt Chamber had a fake palm tree sprouting up from the center of the room and walls painted with a faded trompe l’oeil of the Pyramids. Another chamber represented Caesar’s palace in ancient Rome, with faux-marble nudes in cheap white plaster and sprawling scarlet divans, lately serving as tenement housing for mice. Dev’s survey took in the tattered wall hangings and piles of bat guano.
From the corner of his eye, he saw Dalloway creep nearer, watching him like a stray dog sizing up a ham-bone that someone had left unguarded on the table. “What do you think of ’er, sir? If this property does not suit your needs, we ’ave others ye might like to see. What exactly is it you’re after, if I may inquire?”
Dev stroked his chin, glancing all around him. “I need . . .” Home territory. An environment I can control. After all, he would be surrounded by enemies. He turned smoothly with a smile, playing the role of dissipated rake to perfection. “A place where I can entertain my friends.”
The blonde giggled with excitement at the prospect. Dev smiled at her, rather wishing he could remember her name. So far he had gotten by with darling.
Last night was a bit of a blur, as well, but he imagined he must have enjoyed himself a great deal, by the look of her. Nevertheless, he had been astonished to wake up and find her still there, especially after he had worked her so hard. It had taken him half the night to come, not that she had seemed to mind. He couldn’t help it. He was losing all interest in these hardened professionals with their bag of tricks and their scheming eyes. Now he merely wondered if the chit ever planned on going home.
“Entertaining, sir? Then this could be just the spot!” Dalloway beamed, determined to make the sale. “This is a capital establishment for private parties! As Your Lordship will ’ave noted, it’s convenient to London by a short drive over the bridge, or the guests can be ferried over the river by the watermen. There’s plenty o’ space and many whimsical outbuildings suitable for all manner o’ charmin’ entertainments.”
“There is also the matter of privacy. My, er, friends prefer to take their pleasures away from the scrutiny of prying eyes. The bloody gossip-writers follow us everywhere, don’t you know, scribbling their little tattletales.” Dev waved his hand in a dismissive gesture. “I need a place . . . far from any crowds. An isolated place.” One I can destroy without fear of harming innocent bystanders.
“Well, sir, you passed the gatehouse when you come in—very sturdy, just needs a coat o’ paint. And there’s an admirable wrought-iron fence that runs the perimeter o’ the premises. The property has only one entrance, straight up the drive. To either side is bog. Very treacherous, them mud flats. The only other way in would be by boat, but then, an intruder would have to catch the river’s tide just right or be stranded.”
Dev gave a businesslike nod and feigned indecision, but by the time they returned to the ballroom, his mind was made up. The place would suit his purposes to a tee.
Dalloway turned to him, beaming. “As I said, sir, all she wants is a little tender lovin’ care to be brought back to ’er former glory.”
“That will, ah, cost money,” Charles delicately asserted.
“Hmm,” Dev said in a noncommittal growl. Clasping his hands behind his back, he drifted over to inspect the murals on the walls in all their flowery, faded exuberance, leaving his lawyer to ask Dalloway the appropriate questions.
He gazed at a section of the mural that portrayed the beautiful goddess Flora, wearing nothing but an artfully placed garland of roses.
“Er, my lord?” His solicitor cleared his throat.
“Yes, Charles?” Dev asked in a tone of weary indulgence as he went on studying the picture, but Dalloway interrupted before Charles could speak.
“All the paintin’s you see before you are likenesses of the famous beauties of the previous decade, milord. They all performed ’ere when this place was in its prime. We had water spectacles with fireworks, musical extravaganzas, tightrope walkers—”
“Tightrope walkers, really?” he asked with interest.
“Oh, yes, sir.”
“As I was saying—,” Charles tried again, flicking Dalloway an annoyed glance. “I have doubts, sir. Serious doubts. I—I fear the building is not safe.”
“Life . . . is not safe, Charles.” Dev bent closer to the wall, narrowing his eyes at the figure of Flora as he noticed some marred and faded words etched on the gold ribbon that was painted below the goddess.
Good God. He suddenly raised his arm and snapped his black-gauntleted fingers. “Candle.”
One of the footmen immediately stepped forward and held up the light. Dev scrutinized the awkward calligraphy by the candle’s feeble glow, stunned to make out the name inscribed there: Miss Ginny Highgate, 1803. He stared. By God, ’twas an omen.
“What is it?” Ben asked, joining him by the wall.
“Ginny Highgate,” Dev murmured, turning to him in amazement.
They exchanged a shocked, ominous glance.
“Oh, yes, milord,” Dalloway offered, “Miss Highgate used to sing here every summer. Such a favorite she was with the lads!”
“Who is, ah, Miss Highgate, if I may inquire?” Charles asked.
“A beautiful lady of the theater, sir. Irish, I think,” Dalloway told him. “Such long red hair as you’ve never seen. Aye, all the young gents were mad for Ginny Highgate.”
“What happened to her?” the blonde piped up a trifle jealously.
“Nobody knows,” Dalloway said. “She disappeared.”
Not entirely true, Dev thought, pained by his fairly clear idea of the ugly fate the young beauty had met.
For two years, through various hired agents, he had been covertly investigating the fateful night of the fire that had taken his family from him. He had run from his guilt for a decade, sailing from one end of the globe to the other, but on the ten-year anniversary of his family’s deaths, he had resolved himself to examine every last detail of that night, something he had not been able to face as a shattered youth.
It had not taken long before he had begun to notice that many of the facts about the fire did not add up. Since then, he had chased down every lead, had spent a fortune in bribe money, and had collected a trunkload of documents on the case—newspaper obituaries, indeed, full background investigations of every person who had died in the fire, interviews with the intimidated fire official, depositions from a few useful witnesses, logbooks from the stagecoach companies whose vehicles had traveled that stretch of the road that night. Everything he could lay his hands on.
Unraveling the knot thread by meticulous thread, Dev had finally traced his way through the disappearance of Ginny Highgate, aka Mary Harris, to the Horse and Chariot Club, and it was there that he had met a brick wall. It seemed the murdered redhead was the club’s best-guarded secret.
To learn it, Dev had spent the past six months infiltrating the group, slowly attempting to gain their trust, even though doing so was akin to playing roulette with his life, for they knew full well who he was.
Why they hadn’t killed him already, he was not exactly sure; he could only conclude that, so far, they had bought into his highly convincing facade as a dissipated rogue of the first order. He made them believe he was such a thoughtless pleasure-seeker that it had never crossed his mind that his family’s destruction was anything but the tragic accident that it had been ruled.
They surely suspected him, he mused, but he supposed they let him near because it helped them to feel that they were keeping an eye on him. The thing required the utmost finesse, but Dev was prepared to chance it, for the prize was the one thing he craved more than anything else in the world: peace.
Answers. There could be no peace until he had answers. Why? How? All he really wanted was for life to make sense, but it didn’t and it wouldn’t. Not until he had the answers to the question, nay, the furious demand, that had burned in his brain for twelve long years and had turned the heart in him to ashes.
What had really happened on that terrible night his family had been taken from him? Who was to blame? If there was one shred of hope that there was someone, anyone else that he could blame instead of himself, he was willing to go to any lengths to find it.
By God, if it cost him his life and every last penny of his inheritance, he would find the truth, lay hold of the answers—answers that only his enemies could give him. And when he had the truth in his grasp, when he finally knew who had set that blaze, he would wreak vengeance on them in an orgy of violence the likes of which they had never seen.
Rising once more to his full height, he moved restlessly away from the painting of Ginny Highgate and sent Dalloway a brisk nod. “Right. I’ll take it.” Charles looked at him in alarm. “However, there is the question of price,” he conceded. “It’s much too high. Charles?”
He left his solicitor to negotiate with Mr. Dalloway and sauntered back out to the foyer, where he leaned in the battered doorway and stared out at the frozen swamp, feeling moody and pensive with the return of old memories.
Ben joined him, his large brown eyes full of sensi- tive intelligence behind his rain-flecked spectacles as he searched Dev’s face. “Are you all right?”
He shrugged, lost in his thoughts. Folding his arms across his chest, Dev cast a jaundiced eye over the ragged gardens. “I look at this place and see something of myself,” he said, his voice low, edged with bitter irony. “Sinking into the swamp.” His stare wandered across the lifeless marsh, the stubbled grasses, grayed and stiff with frost. He cast Ben a cynical half-smile. “They say it’s haunted, have you heard? And cursed.”
His friend stared earnestly at him. “I wish you would not do this, Dev. You can still walk away.”
“No, I can’t.” His wry smile faded, the cold hatred darkening his eyes once more, like a cloud shadow moving across the face of a sun-swept hill. “I pay my debts.”
“Even in blood? Even if it costs you your life?”
“What life?” he whispered.
He walked back to rejoin the others, leaving his loyal valet staring after him in distress. As Dev strolled back into the gaudy ballroom, Charles turned to him brightly.
“Ah, there you are, sir!” he said, looking pleased with himself. “Mr. Dalloway has agreed to a new price of thirteen hundred pounds. If this is acceptable to Your Lordship, the deal is done.”
“You think it fair?”
He nodded. “It is reasonable.”
“Well done, Charles.” He snapped his fingers. “Cheque.”
Immediately, the other footman stepped forth bearing a portable desktop, which he held for him. Dev opened the hinged top and pulled out his draftbook. Dipping his quillpen into the tiny inkbottle, he scratched out the promissory note, chuckling darkly to himself. Cursed. Haunted. How very apropos. “See that the place is properly insured before work begins on it, Charles.” He handed Dalloway the cheque. “We’ll need a reliable contractor to coordinate the repairs. Carpenters, roofers, painters, plasterers.”
“You need the rat-catcher first,” Ben muttered, walking in with a disgusted glance at the ballroom while Charles blanched at the expenditures.
“Right. Summon the exterminator to rid the place of pests. As always, thank you for your time, Charles. Mr. Dalloway, you’ve been most helpful. Darling.” He beckoned impatiently to the woman and then stalked out, his entourage falling into ranks.
Behind them, Dalloway silently danced a jig over the rotting floorboards.
Upon walking back out into the cold, Dev heard the cadence of galloping hoofbeats and looked over to find someone riding hard up the drive.
“What an ugly horse,” Ben remarked, also watching the rider.
“Fast, though. Good, long stride,” Dev murmured. “Are we expecting someone?”
“No, my lord,” Charles offered, “I believe it is an herald.”
And indeed, as the rider came closer, they could see the cockade in his hat and the uniform that marked him as an express messenger. Dev helped the blonde into the coach, and a moment later, the rider reined in nearby, his horse’s hooves kicking up a clattery spray of gravel.
“Lord Strathmore?” he called out.
“Yes?”
“Express for you, sir!” The messenger held out the letter.
“Thank you.” He quickly took the letter before the ink ran and nodded to Ben to pay the messenger for the delivery. bath, read the outer fold of the envelope.
Aunt Augusta?
A twinge of guilt stabbed him. He knew he owed the old girl a visit. More than that, he wanted to see her. The dragon had been like a mother to him. She had even saved his life back when he was twenty-one, half-mad with grief, and destroying himself with the bottle. She had bought him a ship, put him on it, and sent him off to see the world in the care of their gruff Scots gamekeeper, Duncan MacTavish. Hang it, he missed the old girl, he thought as he broke the wax seal, but each time he thought of going to see her, everything in him shied away again like a spooked horse refusing a jump.
He couldn’t help it. The love in him was so tied up with loss and pain that he could scarce separate one from the other, and so tended to avoid the whole situation. Like a coward, his conscience readily supplied. He ignored it, his lips twisting in broody self-annoyance while Ben counted out the messenger’s charge.
Dev opened the neatly folded letter and read. As his gaze skimmed the page, the blood promptly drained from his face:
Express
9 February 1817
Bath
Dear Lord Strathmore,
Though we have never met, I trust you will forgive my presumption in writing to you on a matter of greatest urgency. Necessity compels me to set propriety aside to convey to you a most alarming intelligence.
My name is Miss Elizabeth Carlisle, and since August, I have been serving in the capacity of lady’s companion to your esteemed Aunt. It is my sorrowful duty to advise you of a change in the excellent health Her Ladyship has always heretofore enjoyed, and to implore you, if you love her, to come with all due haste . . . before it is too late.
Godspeed, E. Carlisle
For a moment, Dev could only stand there, his face draining of color.
No. Not yet. She’s all I have left.
“My lord?” Charles ventured in a worried tone. “Is aught amiss?”
Without a word, Dev strode over, reached up, pulled the messenger down bodily from his horse, and swung up into the still-warm saddle.
“What the devil—!”
“Pay him, Charles. I’ll leave this brute in the stable at home. I must to Bath.” His voice sounded odd and tight in his ears. “I’ll take the curricle—it’s fastest.” He gathered the reins and wheeled the roan around, glancing over his shoulder. “Ben, follow with my things.”
“But, Devlin!” the blonde protested, poking her head out the carriage window in that ridiculous feathered hat.
He rolled his eyes, losing patience. “Would someone please take that woman home or wherever it is that she goes?”
She let out an angry gasp, but he was already gone, galloping off, hell-for-leather, down the drive, his stomach knotted with panicked dread and guilt for neglecting his only living kin. The despairing knowledge spiraled through his mind that when Aunt Augusta finally left him—never mind his vast inheritance—he would be left completely and unutterably alone. --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
London, 1817
The fanciful cupola-topped pavilion languished in desolation on the frozen marshes south of the Thames, a gaudy ruin, with a gray February sleet blowing against its rusty, fake turrets and boarded-up windows. Some said the place was haunted. Others claimed it was cursed. All that His Lordship’s unassuming little man-of-business knew, however, was that if his glamorous patron did not soon arrive, he was sure to catch his death in this weather.
Clutching his umbrella over his head, Charles Beecham, Esquire, stood wrapped in his brown wool greatcoat, his beaver hat pulled low over his receding hairline, and a look of abject misery on his face. He sneezed abruptly into his handkerchief.
“God bless ye.” Mr. Dalloway, standing nearby, slid him a greasy grin.
“Thank you,” Charles clipped out before turning away from the unkempt property agent with a respectable humph.
Dalloway was the opposition in this matter, determined to bilk His Lordship out of three thousand pounds for the dubious privilege of owning the godforsaken place. Charles meant to advise his patron against the purchase in the strongest possible terms, not the least because it would fall to him to explain the mad expenditure to old Lady Ironsides. Stealing another discreet glance at his fob watch, he pursed his lips. Late.
Alas, his staid life as the Strathmore family’s solicitor had become alarmingly interesting since His Lordship’s return from his high adventures on the seven seas and elsewhere.
Though barely thirty, the viscount had done the sorts of things Charles preferred to read about from the safety of his favorite armchair. Her Ladyship had oft regaled Charles with tales of her dashing nephew’s exploits: battling pirates, chasing down slave ships, living with savages, fending off mountain lions, surveying temples in the wilds of Malaysia, crossing deserts with the nomad caravans of Kandahar. Charles had thought them a lot of cock-and-bull tales until he’d met the man. What on earth could he want with this place? he wondered, then rehearsed a diplomatic warning in his head: This, my lord, is precisely the sort of rash adventure that drove your uncle into dun territory. . . .
Ah, but thinking a thing and saying it to Devil Strathmore were two different matters entirely.
Just then, a drumming sound approached from behind the wintry shroud of pewter fog and needling rain, like thunder rumbling in the distance. Barely discernible at first, it swiftly formed into the deep, recognizable rhythm of pounding hoofbeats.
At last. Charles stared in the direction of the plea- sure grounds’ great iron gates. The ominous cadence grew louder—driving, relentless—reverberating across the marshes, until it shook the earth. Suddenly, a large black coach hurtled out of the indistinguishable gray, barreling up the graveled drive that offered the only safe course through the boggy waste.
The quartet of fine, jet-black horses moved like liquid night, their hooves striking sure over the mud and ice, steam puffing from their nostrils. Stationed fore and aft on the shiny body of the coach, His Lordship’s driver, groom, and two footmen stared straight ahead, impervious to the weather. They were clad in traditional Strathmore livery, a sedate dun color with smart black piping, stiff felt tricornes on their heads, and frothy, white lace jabots at their throats.
Charles looked askance at his opponent as Mr. Dalloway ambled down from his shelter atop the flamboyant curved steps of the pavilion. His wily stare was fixed on the approaching vehicle. Noting the gleam of greed in Dalloway’s eyes, Charles fretted with the unhappy premonition that his rival would win the day, and then what on earth would he tell Her Ladyship? He could only cork his terror at the thought of the formidable dowager’s displeasure by reminding himself of her stern orders seven months ago, upon her nephew’s return to London.
“Send all of Devlin’s bills to me,” the old dragon had instructed in no uncertain terms. When Charles had tactfully questioned the command, seeking only to pro- tect the elderly woman, Her Ladyship had pooh-poohed his hesitancy. “It is enough that he has come home at last, Charles. My handsome nephew must cut a dash in Town! You will send his bills to me.”
And so, obediently, Charles had.
His Lordship’s bills, like a flock of ink-smudged doves, had winged their way to the dowager’s elegant villa in the Bath countryside: the handsome house on Portman Street and all its elegant furnishings, Aubusson carpets, French damask drapes, Classical paintings and nude marble statues; the wine cellar; the staff’s wages; the coach, the drag, the curricle; the horses; the clothes; the boots; the club dues for White’s and Brooke’s; the opera box, the parties, the jewels for himself and a number of unnamed women; even the IOU’s from a few unlucky hands at the gaming tables. Dear old Aunt Augusta had paid them all without a peep. But three thousand quid for an old, abandoned pleasure-ground? It seemed excessive even for him.
As his coachman pulled the team to a halt in front of the pavilion, Charles swallowed hard, his heart beating faster. The footmen jumped down from their post in back of the coach and marched forward like soulless clockwork automata, one opening the carriage door, the other producing an umbrella, which he held at the ready. Dalloway cast Charles a nervous glance, no longer looking quite so cocky.
“You haven’t met His Lordship yet, have you?” Charles murmured under his breath, feeling a trifle smug.
Dalloway did not answer. He looked again at the coach, where the footman knocked down the folding metal steps and then held the door, staring forward in stone-faced efficiency.
The first person to climb out of the coach was the amiable Bennett Freeman, a neatly dressed, young black man from America who served as His Lordship’s gentleman’s gentleman, had followed him on his journeys around the globe, and attended the viscount in much of his day-to-day business. Behind his wire-rimmed spectacles, Mr. Freeman’s intelligent brown eyes scanned the bizarre location with a perplexed glance, but when he saw Charles, he waved affably and dashed toward the pavilion to escape the weather.
Next, a dainty, gloved hand emerged from the carriage, accepting the footman’s assistance. Charles sneezed again as His Lordship’s latest elegant ladybird stepped down from the coach and minced toward the stairs, teetering over the mud on her high metal pattens. It was not her clothes but her mercenary eyes and wiggly walk that gave away her profession—these days the top courtesans dressed as fine as the ton’s best hostesses. She wore a tight spencer of maroon velvet and held up her skirts with one gloved hand, while with the other, she tried to shield her magnificent hat with its clutch of ostrich plumes from the steady drizzle.
Gentleman enough to show chivalry even to her sort, Charles hurried over and gave the high-priced harlot his umbrella.
“Oh, thank you, sir,” she responded in a breathy purr.
Dalloway eagerly assisted the hussy in going up the wet stairs.
Last of all came Devil Strathmore.
The footman with the umbrella had to hold his arm higher in order to shelter his towering master from the weather. His Lordship slid out of the coach with a sinuous motion, then paused to adjust the fur-trimmed greatcoat of luxurious black wool that hung carelessly from his massive shoulders and draped his powerful frame. Small, tinted spectacles shaded his eyes from the flat, gray glare of afternoon; he wore his long, raven hair tied back in a silky queue. A small gold hoop adorned his left earlobe. Eccentricity, after all, ran in his family, as did his Irish good looks. His skin was still coppered from that desert he had crossed months ago, but his lazy grin when he caught sight of his loyal family retainer flashed like the white cliffs of Dover.
There was no helping it. Even to a middle-aged fuddy-duddy like Charles, that smile, when Devil Strathmore doled it out, could make a person stand up taller. He looked every inch the hardened, worldly roué—and he was no man to cross, to be sure—but if he liked you, there was a warmth in him that no one could resist.
“Charles, good to see you.” Lord Strathmore strutted toward him with long-legged, confident strides, the umbrella-holding footman hurrying to keep up.
“My lord.” Charles winced at his hearty handshake and nearly tripped forward when the big man clapped him on the back.
He swept an elegant gesture toward the building. “Shall we?”
“Yes, of course, my lord. B-but, first I really must say—”
“Problem, Charles?” He took off his tinted spectacles and stared down at him for a moment with pale, wolf- like eyes.
Charles looked into that fathomless gaze and saw traces of the wilderness still lingering there: leafy shadows; blue vistas; deep, dark canyons. He gulped. “N-no, of course, my lord, no problem. It’s just, well, it’s a terrible expense, don’t you see.” He faltered, seeing he was having no effect. “That is to say, I am not entirely sure Her Ladyship would approve.”
Dev paused, studying him.
As an ardent student of human nature, he appreciated the courage, indeed, the loyalty it took his little solicitor to stand up to him. He truly did. All the same, in this matter, he would brook no denial. Explaining his true motives was out of the question, of course. It seemed he was just going to have to brazen it out and insist on having his way because—well, because he was Devil Strathmore and had always done exactly what he liked.
He slipped Charles one of his most charming smiles and tucked his spectacles inside his breast pocket. “Don’t be daft, Charles. Aunt Augusta thinks I hung the moon.” He turned and jogged up the stairs.
“Well, that is true—” Charles hastened to follow. “But perhaps I could explain it better to her if it would please Your Lordship to inform me wh-why you wish to buy this place?”
Dev laughed. “Why, for the same reason I do everything: because it amuses me. Come, come, Charles, don’t be a killjoy. Let’s have a look.”
“But, sir—she’ll have my head for this!”
“Charles.” He stopped, turned, and sighed, then affectionately fixed the little man’s lapels. “Dear, dear, Charles. Neat, tidy Charles. Very well, I shall tell you what’s afoot, but I am taking you into strictest confidence. Understood?”
“Sir!” His eyes widened at this spectacular show of favor. “Of course, my lord. You have my word a-as a gentleman.”
“Capital.” Dev grasped his shoulder and pulled him nearer, staring firmly at him. “Now, then.” He bent his head toward the shorter man and lowered his voice. “Have you ever heard, Charles, of the Horse and Chariot Driving Club?”
Charles’s eyes widened in scandalized innocence. “Sir!” he breathed.
“Quite,” Dev replied. “You know how I enjoy the sport of driving.”
“Y-yes, sir. The curricle, the racing drag, your silver stallion—”
“Precisely. Well, there are a few . . . shall we say, requirements for entrée into the club, you see.” He ticked them off on his fingers. “First, a prospective member must be of good birth, have no morals and a great deal of money.”
“But—you don’t, sir.”
Dev laughed without humor. “Not yet, of course, but it’s the same as if I did.”
Indeed, he was counting on his aunt’s fortune as critical to his success. Gambling, for example, was how he had gotten close to his targets in the first place, for such sharpers as the boys of the Horse and Chariot Club could always use another deep player to round out the whist table. Curious—the more he lost without complaint, the more the blackguards seemed to enjoy his company. But let them win for now, he thought. Soon, they would lose everything.
Including their lives.
“The second requirement an aspiring member must fulfill is to show his respect by presenting the brotherhood with a suitable gift. This—” Dev glanced around at the building, then gave Charles a conspiratorial wink. “—will knock ’em off their bloody feet.”
At least it would when he had packed the floor with explosives.
“I’ve heard there’s a third requirement,” he added breezily, “but so far, I’ve been unable to find out what it is.” “Yes, but sir—the Horse and Chariot!” Charles whispered in dread. “Everyone knows—well, you have been away from Town all these years—perhaps you have not heard—?”
To Dev’s amusement, his little lawyer glanced from side to side, as though Damage Randall, Blood Staines, or that elegant pervert, Carstairs, might be lurking nearby.
“They are a very bad sort, sir. Very bad. Duels— unspeakable things! I am quite sure your aunt would not at all approve. Not at all!”
“Well, Charles, you may be right, but as I said, I do love the sport. A true aficionado of the four-in-hand is prepared to overlook such things. Don’t you agree? I’m so glad you gave me your word not to mention this to old Lady Ironsides. Shall we?” Dev cast him a silky smile.
“Oh, dear,” Charles said under his breath, hurrying after him as Dev continued up the stairs. “Very well, but do please take care not to appear too eager in front of this Dalloway creature, my lord. He is a low, sly thing.”
Having traded guns, camels, and spices with the Bedouin caravans in Marrakech, possibly the shrewdest hagglers in the world, he trusted he could manage one ill-groomed Cockney property agent, but Dev hid his amusement and bowed to his solicitor with princely grace. It was the man’s loyalty that mattered, after all. “Thank you, Charles. I stand duly advised.”
Mollified by his acknowledgment, Charles followed him into the building without further fussing. Introductions were quickly exchanged, and in short order, they embarked with Mr. Dalloway on their tour of the pavilion.
Leaving the octagonal foyer with its red-painted ceiling, tainted mirrors, and touches of chipped gilt, they went through a pair of large, ornately carved doors that looked like the product of some opium eater’s fevered fancy. The whole place had an eerie, almost sinister air of intoxication and decay; the lingering odor of stale beer rose up in a fog from the worm-eaten floorboards and mingled with the general musty smell.
As they moved away from the foyer, the gray daylight shaded into darkness, for the windows were all boarded over. Dev’s two footmen carried candles for their party, as did Mr. Dalloway. They ventured deeper into the gloom, the floors creaking like tortured ghosts. One could almost hear the phantom echoes of forgotten laughter; spiders went scuttling across the walls. Even inside, the place was cold enough to cloud their breath.
The blonde shrieked and huddled close to Dev when something swooped over their heads. Lifting the candles higher, they soon discovered the colonies of bats and house martins that had gotten in through one of the chimneys.
In the main corridor, the flickering flames of their candelabra revealed tall columns painted like candy canes, a grimy parquet floor laid out in a dizzying zigzag design. Brightly colored, swirling murals flowed fantastically across the walls. Interior doors led to shadowed galleries and a dozen garish salons. There was even a ballroom with an elevated stand for an orchestra.
“God, it’s hideous,” Ben declared, turning to him.
“Deliciously so,” Dev purred too low for Dalloway to hear. He sent his trusty valet and friend a devilish glance. “It’s perfect.” The twisted lads of the Horse and Chariot would love it. The perfect setting in which to lull their senses so he could move closer to the answers he so desperately craved.
Ben frowned, but Dalloway kept up his lively soliloquy, ignoring the rotting floorboards, the decade’s worth of cobwebs hanging from the lightless chandelier, and the little cascades trickling down here and there where the tin roof leaked.
Charles wiped a chilly droplet off his forehead, his lips pursed in distaste, but Dev saw that his solicitor had been right about the property agent. Dalloway was as slick as oil and cheerful as a rat atop a garbage pile as he led them through the place, extolling its supposed virtues.
“The main pavilion in which we now stand encompasses eleven thousand square feet, with extensive kitchen facilities suitable for feedin’ an army. Mind your step, miss. Here’s the stairs. Ye must see the rooms above. . . .”
On the upper floor, themed chambers led off the main corridor. One was made like a jungle; the Egypt Chamber had a fake palm tree sprouting up from the center of the room and walls painted with a faded trompe l’oeil of the Pyramids. Another chamber represented Caesar’s palace in ancient Rome, with faux-marble nudes in cheap white plaster and sprawling scarlet divans, lately serving as tenement housing for mice. Dev’s survey took in the tattered wall hangings and piles of bat guano.
From the corner of his eye, he saw Dalloway creep nearer, watching him like a stray dog sizing up a ham-bone that someone had left unguarded on the table. “What do you think of ’er, sir? If this property does not suit your needs, we ’ave others ye might like to see. What exactly is it you’re after, if I may inquire?”
Dev stroked his chin, glancing all around him. “I need . . .” Home territory. An environment I can control. After all, he would be surrounded by enemies. He turned smoothly with a smile, playing the role of dissipated rake to perfection. “A place where I can entertain my friends.”
The blonde giggled with excitement at the prospect. Dev smiled at her, rather wishing he could remember her name. So far he had gotten by with darling.
Last night was a bit of a blur, as well, but he imagined he must have enjoyed himself a great deal, by the look of her. Nevertheless, he had been astonished to wake up and find her still there, especially after he had worked her so hard. It had taken him half the night to come, not that she had seemed to mind. He couldn’t help it. He was losing all interest in these hardened professionals with their bag of tricks and their scheming eyes. Now he merely wondered if the chit ever planned on going home.
“Entertaining, sir? Then this could be just the spot!” Dalloway beamed, determined to make the sale. “This is a capital establishment for private parties! As Your Lordship will ’ave noted, it’s convenient to London by a short drive over the bridge, or the guests can be ferried over the river by the watermen. There’s plenty o’ space and many whimsical outbuildings suitable for all manner o’ charmin’ entertainments.”
“There is also the matter of privacy. My, er, friends prefer to take their pleasures away from the scrutiny of prying eyes. The bloody gossip-writers follow us everywhere, don’t you know, scribbling their little tattletales.” Dev waved his hand in a dismissive gesture. “I need a place . . . far from any crowds. An isolated place.” One I can destroy without fear of harming innocent bystanders.
“Well, sir, you passed the gatehouse when you come in—very sturdy, just needs a coat o’ paint. And there’s an admirable wrought-iron fence that runs the perimeter o’ the premises. The property has only one entrance, straight up the drive. To either side is bog. Very treacherous, them mud flats. The only other way in would be by boat, but then, an intruder would have to catch the river’s tide just right or be stranded.”
Dev gave a businesslike nod and feigned indecision, but by the time they returned to the ballroom, his mind was made up. The place would suit his purposes to a tee.
Dalloway turned to him, beaming. “As I said, sir, all she wants is a little tender lovin’ care to be brought back to ’er former glory.”
“That will, ah, cost money,” Charles delicately asserted.
“Hmm,” Dev said in a noncommittal growl. Clasping his hands behind his back, he drifted over to inspect the murals on the walls in all their flowery, faded exuberance, leaving his lawyer to ask Dalloway the appropriate questions.
He gazed at a section of the mural that portrayed the beautiful goddess Flora, wearing nothing but an artfully placed garland of roses.
“Er, my lord?” His solicitor cleared his throat.
“Yes, Charles?” Dev asked in a tone of weary indulgence as he went on studying the picture, but Dalloway interrupted before Charles could speak.
“All the paintin’s you see before you are likenesses of the famous beauties of the previous decade, milord. They all performed ’ere when this place was in its prime. We had water spectacles with fireworks, musical extravaganzas, tightrope walkers—”
“Tightrope walkers, really?” he asked with interest.
“Oh, yes, sir.”
“As I was saying—,” Charles tried again, flicking Dalloway an annoyed glance. “I have doubts, sir. Serious doubts. I—I fear the building is not safe.”
“Life . . . is not safe, Charles.” Dev bent closer to the wall, narrowing his eyes at the figure of Flora as he noticed some marred and faded words etched on the gold ribbon that was painted below the goddess.
Good God. He suddenly raised his arm and snapped his black-gauntleted fingers. “Candle.”
One of the footmen immediately stepped forward and held up the light. Dev scrutinized the awkward calligraphy by the candle’s feeble glow, stunned to make out the name inscribed there: Miss Ginny Highgate, 1803. He stared. By God, ’twas an omen.
“What is it?” Ben asked, joining him by the wall.
“Ginny Highgate,” Dev murmured, turning to him in amazement.
They exchanged a shocked, ominous glance.
“Oh, yes, milord,” Dalloway offered, “Miss Highgate used to sing here every summer. Such a favorite she was with the lads!”
“Who is, ah, Miss Highgate, if I may inquire?” Charles asked.
“A beautiful lady of the theater, sir. Irish, I think,” Dalloway told him. “Such long red hair as you’ve never seen. Aye, all the young gents were mad for Ginny Highgate.”
“What happened to her?” the blonde piped up a trifle jealously.
“Nobody knows,” Dalloway said. “She disappeared.”
Not entirely true, Dev thought, pained by his fairly clear idea of the ugly fate the young beauty had met.
For two years, through various hired agents, he had been covertly investigating the fateful night of the fire that had taken his family from him. He had run from his guilt for a decade, sailing from one end of the globe to the other, but on the ten-year anniversary of his family’s deaths, he had resolved himself to examine every last detail of that night, something he had not been able to face as a shattered youth.
It had not taken long before he had begun to notice that many of the facts about the fire did not add up. Since then, he had chased down every lead, had spent a fortune in bribe money, and had collected a trunkload of documents on the case—newspaper obituaries, indeed, full background investigations of every person who had died in the fire, interviews with the intimidated fire official, depositions from a few useful witnesses, logbooks from the stagecoach companies whose vehicles had traveled that stretch of the road that night. Everything he could lay his hands on.
Unraveling the knot thread by meticulous thread, Dev had finally traced his way through the disappearance of Ginny Highgate, aka Mary Harris, to the Horse and Chariot Club, and it was there that he had met a brick wall. It seemed the murdered redhead was the club’s best-guarded secret.
To learn it, Dev had spent the past six months infiltrating the group, slowly attempting to gain their trust, even though doing so was akin to playing roulette with his life, for they knew full well who he was.
Why they hadn’t killed him already, he was not exactly sure; he could only conclude that, so far, they had bought into his highly convincing facade as a dissipated rogue of the first order. He made them believe he was such a thoughtless pleasure-seeker that it had never crossed his mind that his family’s destruction was anything but the tragic accident that it had been ruled.
They surely suspected him, he mused, but he supposed they let him near because it helped them to feel that they were keeping an eye on him. The thing required the utmost finesse, but Dev was prepared to chance it, for the prize was the one thing he craved more than anything else in the world: peace.
Answers. There could be no peace until he had answers. Why? How? All he really wanted was for life to make sense, but it didn’t and it wouldn’t. Not until he had the answers to the question, nay, the furious demand, that had burned in his brain for twelve long years and had turned the heart in him to ashes.
What had really happened on that terrible night his family had been taken from him? Who was to blame? If there was one shred of hope that there was someone, anyone else that he could blame instead of himself, he was willing to go to any lengths to find it.
By God, if it cost him his life and every last penny of his inheritance, he would find the truth, lay hold of the answers—answers that only his enemies could give him. And when he had the truth in his grasp, when he finally knew who had set that blaze, he would wreak vengeance on them in an orgy of violence the likes of which they had never seen.
Rising once more to his full height, he moved restlessly away from the painting of Ginny Highgate and sent Dalloway a brisk nod. “Right. I’ll take it.” Charles looked at him in alarm. “However, there is the question of price,” he conceded. “It’s much too high. Charles?”
He left his solicitor to negotiate with Mr. Dalloway and sauntered back out to the foyer, where he leaned in the battered doorway and stared out at the frozen swamp, feeling moody and pensive with the return of old memories.
Ben joined him, his large brown eyes full of sensi- tive intelligence behind his rain-flecked spectacles as he searched Dev’s face. “Are you all right?”
He shrugged, lost in his thoughts. Folding his arms across his chest, Dev cast a jaundiced eye over the ragged gardens. “I look at this place and see something of myself,” he said, his voice low, edged with bitter irony. “Sinking into the swamp.” His stare wandered across the lifeless marsh, the stubbled grasses, grayed and stiff with frost. He cast Ben a cynical half-smile. “They say it’s haunted, have you heard? And cursed.”
His friend stared earnestly at him. “I wish you would not do this, Dev. You can still walk away.”
“No, I can’t.” His wry smile faded, the cold hatred darkening his eyes once more, like a cloud shadow moving across the face of a sun-swept hill. “I pay my debts.”
“Even in blood? Even if it costs you your life?”
“What life?” he whispered.
He walked back to rejoin the others, leaving his loyal valet staring after him in distress. As Dev strolled back into the gaudy ballroom, Charles turned to him brightly.
“Ah, there you are, sir!” he said, looking pleased with himself. “Mr. Dalloway has agreed to a new price of thirteen hundred pounds. If this is acceptable to Your Lordship, the deal is done.”
“You think it fair?”
He nodded. “It is reasonable.”
“Well done, Charles.” He snapped his fingers. “Cheque.”
Immediately, the other footman stepped forth bearing a portable desktop, which he held for him. Dev opened the hinged top and pulled out his draftbook. Dipping his quillpen into the tiny inkbottle, he scratched out the promissory note, chuckling darkly to himself. Cursed. Haunted. How very apropos. “See that the place is properly insured before work begins on it, Charles.” He handed Dalloway the cheque. “We’ll need a reliable contractor to coordinate the repairs. Carpenters, roofers, painters, plasterers.”
“You need the rat-catcher first,” Ben muttered, walking in with a disgusted glance at the ballroom while Charles blanched at the expenditures.
“Right. Summon the exterminator to rid the place of pests. As always, thank you for your time, Charles. Mr. Dalloway, you’ve been most helpful. Darling.” He beckoned impatiently to the woman and then stalked out, his entourage falling into ranks.
Behind them, Dalloway silently danced a jig over the rotting floorboards.
Upon walking back out into the cold, Dev heard the cadence of galloping hoofbeats and looked over to find someone riding hard up the drive.
“What an ugly horse,” Ben remarked, also watching the rider.
“Fast, though. Good, long stride,” Dev murmured. “Are we expecting someone?”
“No, my lord,” Charles offered, “I believe it is an herald.”
And indeed, as the rider came closer, they could see the cockade in his hat and the uniform that marked him as an express messenger. Dev helped the blonde into the coach, and a moment later, the rider reined in nearby, his horse’s hooves kicking up a clattery spray of gravel.
“Lord Strathmore?” he called out.
“Yes?”
“Express for you, sir!” The messenger held out the letter.
“Thank you.” He quickly took the letter before the ink ran and nodded to Ben to pay the messenger for the delivery. bath, read the outer fold of the envelope.
Aunt Augusta?
A twinge of guilt stabbed him. He knew he owed the old girl a visit. More than that, he wanted to see her. The dragon had been like a mother to him. She had even saved his life back when he was twenty-one, half-mad with grief, and destroying himself with the bottle. She had bought him a ship, put him on it, and sent him off to see the world in the care of their gruff Scots gamekeeper, Duncan MacTavish. Hang it, he missed the old girl, he thought as he broke the wax seal, but each time he thought of going to see her, everything in him shied away again like a spooked horse refusing a jump.
He couldn’t help it. The love in him was so tied up with loss and pain that he could scarce separate one from the other, and so tended to avoid the whole situation. Like a coward, his conscience readily supplied. He ignored it, his lips twisting in broody self-annoyance while Ben counted out the messenger’s charge.
Dev opened the neatly folded letter and read. As his gaze skimmed the page, the blood promptly drained from his face:
Express
9 February 1817
Bath
Dear Lord Strathmore,
Though we have never met, I trust you will forgive my presumption in writing to you on a matter of greatest urgency. Necessity compels me to set propriety aside to convey to you a most alarming intelligence.
My name is Miss Elizabeth Carlisle, and since August, I have been serving in the capacity of lady’s companion to your esteemed Aunt. It is my sorrowful duty to advise you of a change in the excellent health Her Ladyship has always heretofore enjoyed, and to implore you, if you love her, to come with all due haste . . . before it is too late.
Godspeed, E. Carlisle
For a moment, Dev could only stand there, his face draining of color.
No. Not yet. She’s all I have left.
“My lord?” Charles ventured in a worried tone. “Is aught amiss?”
Without a word, Dev strode over, reached up, pulled the messenger down bodily from his horse, and swung up into the still-warm saddle.
“What the devil—!”
“Pay him, Charles. I’ll leave this brute in the stable at home. I must to Bath.” His voice sounded odd and tight in his ears. “I’ll take the curricle—it’s fastest.” He gathered the reins and wheeled the roan around, glancing over his shoulder. “Ben, follow with my things.”
“But, Devlin!” the blonde protested, poking her head out the carriage window in that ridiculous feathered hat.
He rolled his eyes, losing patience. “Would someone please take that woman home or wherever it is that she goes?”
She let out an angry gasp, but he was already gone, galloping off, hell-for-leather, down the drive, his stomach knotted with panicked dread and guilt for neglecting his only living kin. The despairing knowledge spiraled through his mind that when Aunt Augusta finally left him—never mind his vast inheritance—he would be left completely and unutterably alone. --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
From the Back Cover
"Celebrated storyteller Gaelen Foley brings her craft to new heights with Devil Takes a Bride," the seductive tale of a man bent on revenge and the beauty who teaches him to love again. . . .
In the quiet English countryside, far from the intrigues of London, Lizzie Carlisle slowly mends her broken heart, devoting herself to her new position as lady's companion to the Dowager Viscountess Strathmore-- until her peaceful life is turned upside down by a visit from "Devil" Strathmore, the old woman's untamed nephew--a dangerously handsome man whose wicked reputation hides a tortured soul.
Devlin Kimball, Lord Strathmore, has spent years adventuring on the high seas, struggling to make his peace with the tragedy that claimed the lives of his family. But now he has uncovered the dark truth behind the so-called accident and swears retribution. He has no intention of taking a bride--until his eccentric aunt's will forces he and Lizzie together, and Devlin finds his path to vengeance blocked by the stubborn but oh-so-tempting Miss Carlisle. Her passionate nature rivals his own. But disillusioned once by love, Lizzie will accept nothing less than his true devotion. . . . --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
In the quiet English countryside, far from the intrigues of London, Lizzie Carlisle slowly mends her broken heart, devoting herself to her new position as lady's companion to the Dowager Viscountess Strathmore-- until her peaceful life is turned upside down by a visit from "Devil" Strathmore, the old woman's untamed nephew--a dangerously handsome man whose wicked reputation hides a tortured soul.
Devlin Kimball, Lord Strathmore, has spent years adventuring on the high seas, struggling to make his peace with the tragedy that claimed the lives of his family. But now he has uncovered the dark truth behind the so-called accident and swears retribution. He has no intention of taking a bride--until his eccentric aunt's will forces he and Lizzie together, and Devlin finds his path to vengeance blocked by the stubborn but oh-so-tempting Miss Carlisle. Her passionate nature rivals his own. But disillusioned once by love, Lizzie will accept nothing less than his true devotion. . . . --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
From Booklist
Devlin "Devil" Kimball, Viscount Strathmore, has one goal in life: to find and punish the fiends who killed his parents and young sister. Devlin infiltrates the Horse and Chariot Club, searching for the murderers among the dissolute members only to be pulled away from his mission of vengeance by a hasty missive penned by Lizzie, his Aunt Augusta's companion. When Devlin arrives at his aunt's home he discovers the letter is merely a ruse on Lizzie's part to get him to visit, but her plan brings some unexpected consequences when Lizzie finds herself being seduced by the devilishly sexy Devlin. At first Devlin has no intent of seriously pursuing Lizzie, but when his matchmaking aunt adds an interesting twist to her will, Devlin and Lizzie are forced to consider an arrangement neither would have imagined: marriage. With its wonderfully complicated, unforgettable characters; sharp wit; and riveting plot rife with menacing danger and sizzling passion, Foley's latest Knight's Miscellany Historical Regency is simply superb. John Charles
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Copyright © American Library Association. All rights reserved --This text refers to the mass_market edition.
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"'Complex and engaging characters... Intense emotions and great depth of poignancy enthrall from beginning to end.' ROMANTIC TIMES 'With its wonderfully complicated, unforgettable characters, sharp wit, and a riveting plot rife with menacing danger and sizzling passion, Foley's latest Knight Miscellany historical Regency is simply superb.' BOOKLIST 'A truly sensual romance, possessing depth of plot and character' PUBLISHERS WEEKLY"
--This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition.
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- Publisher : Ballantine Books (April 25, 2006)
- Publication date : April 25, 2006
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I read this years and years ago but it's not one that has stood up to the rereading test. I can't believe how many modern phrases the author used. As one other reviewer mentions, there are loads and loads of plot holes. Behaviour was modern too. The main characters were always off on their own and getting up to stuff that no decent woman would have been able to. When the h was a teacher at a girls school, she was given weekends off to go to balls. Really? There are glimmers of a good story too and that's the reason this gets an "on the fence" 3 stars. The h is the downtrodden companion of the h in "Lady of Desire". Here she is now the companion of the H's aunt and she tricks him in to coming to visit his neglected relation. There are sparks from the start but I still don't believe she would have let him take the liberties that he did when they'd barely just met. Also he offers to make her his mistress and if ever there's a theme I don't like, then that's it. Anyway the H lost his parents and sister in a tragic fire that he has always blamed himself for. He's spent 10 years working out who is responsible so that he take his revenge. This is a very busy book with lots going on.
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I have mixed feelings about this book. This reads like a round robin story where different authors pick up where the other author left off and put their own spin to the story. It read as though the first half and the second half were written by different authors, or else the same author took a multi-year break before finishing it. The first half of the book was a page turner with exquisite writing. I would love JUST to review the first part. The second half was incongruous on all levels, with even the characterizations changing from the first half. I never want to read another book by the person who wrote the second half of this, but I would love to read more by whoever wrote the first half. So, here’s the review of the head scratching antics in this split tale.
The writing: While the writing in the first half was exquisite. It bordered on purple prose, but it was still vivid and clever. The second half was ridiculous, laughable even, and read like a high school creative writing student who thought that EVERY noun needed an adjective and EVERY verb and adverb, even the most unimportant of nouns and verbs, and the adj and adv didn’t add to the description, just emptily placed with words like “beautiful” and “wonderful” that don’t tell us anything. One reviewer already mentioned how ridiculous the writing became in the second half of the book, especially with the paragraph that compares the hero to a cougar, a Mohawk warrior, a Nile croc, a Bengal tiger, a wolf, and a demon literally in the same sentence. ONE sentence. This is the kind of writing you see from grade school writers not professionals.
The characters: The bad guy characterizations were a bit odd. Instead of seeming like bad guys, they seemed a bit feeble minded, a bit slow giant, if you will. And one of them was a real confusion because his character kept changing throughout the book, not as in developing, but as in his profile sheet got swapped with other “bad guy” profiles. At some points he seemed to like little girls and was made out to be a crafty villain and other points he was a simple-minded oaf who preferred grown women and was even in love with one. I continuously had to ask myself, “Wait, who is this again?” because even though the name stayed the same, the character profile didn’t.
As with the bad guys, the heroine seemed to have multiple personalities. Again, it felt as though the book started with clear-cut character profiles, but somehow the profiles got mixed up and confused (or else a different writer took over, or the book was completed years after being started). The heroine we meet at the beginning is NOT the same character we meet several chapters later. I loved the heroine in the beginning of the book, but several chapters in, she transformed into a whore, throwing herself at a man she didn't know or even like. Several chapters after that she changed into a mischievous and giggly girl who loves to gossip and party. Every few chapters, her personality would change drastically, as though she were a different character. None of these match the person we meet at the beginning who has a clearly defined character profile and sounds like a great heroine.
There is a great deal of confusion with the ages of the “children” in the book and the way the school for girls is run. First, why was a teacher able to have male visitors at the school whenever she liked and able to spend weekends at ton balls? Second, what sort of woman invites men to come to her room at night while living in a school where young girls reside in surrounding rooms? The greatest confusion was with the ages of the “children.” In this book, there are several “children” who are 16. 16 is not a child at that time. Many 16 year olds are making their debut and marrying. But all scenes of these grown 16 year old women are made out to be as though they're under 10. They're described as being “childlike,” complete with pigtails, mud-play, dressing up pets to play make-believe, etc. They are treated like children even being spoiled with candies, (“Would you like some candy, little girl” says one of the villains). They are referred to as children and act like children. These were adult women for the time period. These 16 year olds are throughout the book and part of the plot points, but all because they are only children. I was pulling my hair out because everything except the mention of age made it sound as though they were about 7 years old, when these were very definitely adult women for that time period.
The story line: First half of story is quite good, a page-turner, but around the time that the hero kidnaps the heroine, the whole story becomes outlandish and absurd. The story line itself veers way off course, and suddenly instead of a story of revenge and intrigue we have a comedy of heroines riding ponies across the country in night rails, average-looking bluestocking spinsters attending balls and turning into young vivacious beauties that turn the heads of every titled male in the room all in a snap of a finger, titled men rolling on the ground fighting over school teachers on school grounds, and rakes climbing into second floor windows of schoolhouses to kidnap teachers. Ridiculous. I had to put the book down for awhile after that and talk myself into returning to it in hopes it improved.
The history (or lack thereof): The dialogue was a nightmare from start to finish. Everything, and I mean everything, was MODERN AMERICAN SLANG. Nothing resembled British verbiage, much less aristocratic or historical language. Everything was "Hey! What's up?" "Nuttin. You?" All I could hear when they spoke was one of those American teen comedies where all of the teens are trying to get laid at a party. Not the image you want when reading a historical romance. The behaviors are also modern. While the writer seems to have researched the time period, modern actions that would never have been accepted at that time kept cropping up, like being at a party and hanging on your date's arm with your arm looped through his as the two of you socialize throughout the evening. This would have been an awkward thing to do even for a betrothed couple, but a single young lady doing this with a known rake? The same two people holding hands at a party, kissing each other in front of others, disappearing into shadows to make out, getting caught in embrace often while whispering about sex….how is any of this appropriate for a regency-period story? This is all modern American teenage behavior. Even the older generations were referred to as "pensioners," a very modern term that has no place in the historical setting. The ending was more akin to the Wild West than regency England. An earl and a baron go running around town with sawed-off shotguns and rifles shooting up the place and everyone in their way. Ridiculous! One of the joys of reading historical romances is seeing how a romance would bud within the constraints and social rules at the time. When authors throw the rules out the window to make up their own, there's no point in the story being historical any more. I'm not reading it for the fashion and horse-drawn carriages. I'm reading it for the historical romance, so make it historical! And for the love of all things holy, why does everyone call each other “sweeting”? I developed a twitch every time I saw that word, which was nigh every page. At first it seems just a word used by the hero, which was fine, but before long, everyone in the book was using it with everyone else, be it a sister or a young girl or someone they're courting, or even a total stranger.
The writing: While the writing in the first half was exquisite. It bordered on purple prose, but it was still vivid and clever. The second half was ridiculous, laughable even, and read like a high school creative writing student who thought that EVERY noun needed an adjective and EVERY verb and adverb, even the most unimportant of nouns and verbs, and the adj and adv didn’t add to the description, just emptily placed with words like “beautiful” and “wonderful” that don’t tell us anything. One reviewer already mentioned how ridiculous the writing became in the second half of the book, especially with the paragraph that compares the hero to a cougar, a Mohawk warrior, a Nile croc, a Bengal tiger, a wolf, and a demon literally in the same sentence. ONE sentence. This is the kind of writing you see from grade school writers not professionals.
The characters: The bad guy characterizations were a bit odd. Instead of seeming like bad guys, they seemed a bit feeble minded, a bit slow giant, if you will. And one of them was a real confusion because his character kept changing throughout the book, not as in developing, but as in his profile sheet got swapped with other “bad guy” profiles. At some points he seemed to like little girls and was made out to be a crafty villain and other points he was a simple-minded oaf who preferred grown women and was even in love with one. I continuously had to ask myself, “Wait, who is this again?” because even though the name stayed the same, the character profile didn’t.
As with the bad guys, the heroine seemed to have multiple personalities. Again, it felt as though the book started with clear-cut character profiles, but somehow the profiles got mixed up and confused (or else a different writer took over, or the book was completed years after being started). The heroine we meet at the beginning is NOT the same character we meet several chapters later. I loved the heroine in the beginning of the book, but several chapters in, she transformed into a whore, throwing herself at a man she didn't know or even like. Several chapters after that she changed into a mischievous and giggly girl who loves to gossip and party. Every few chapters, her personality would change drastically, as though she were a different character. None of these match the person we meet at the beginning who has a clearly defined character profile and sounds like a great heroine.
There is a great deal of confusion with the ages of the “children” in the book and the way the school for girls is run. First, why was a teacher able to have male visitors at the school whenever she liked and able to spend weekends at ton balls? Second, what sort of woman invites men to come to her room at night while living in a school where young girls reside in surrounding rooms? The greatest confusion was with the ages of the “children.” In this book, there are several “children” who are 16. 16 is not a child at that time. Many 16 year olds are making their debut and marrying. But all scenes of these grown 16 year old women are made out to be as though they're under 10. They're described as being “childlike,” complete with pigtails, mud-play, dressing up pets to play make-believe, etc. They are treated like children even being spoiled with candies, (“Would you like some candy, little girl” says one of the villains). They are referred to as children and act like children. These were adult women for the time period. These 16 year olds are throughout the book and part of the plot points, but all because they are only children. I was pulling my hair out because everything except the mention of age made it sound as though they were about 7 years old, when these were very definitely adult women for that time period.
The story line: First half of story is quite good, a page-turner, but around the time that the hero kidnaps the heroine, the whole story becomes outlandish and absurd. The story line itself veers way off course, and suddenly instead of a story of revenge and intrigue we have a comedy of heroines riding ponies across the country in night rails, average-looking bluestocking spinsters attending balls and turning into young vivacious beauties that turn the heads of every titled male in the room all in a snap of a finger, titled men rolling on the ground fighting over school teachers on school grounds, and rakes climbing into second floor windows of schoolhouses to kidnap teachers. Ridiculous. I had to put the book down for awhile after that and talk myself into returning to it in hopes it improved.
The history (or lack thereof): The dialogue was a nightmare from start to finish. Everything, and I mean everything, was MODERN AMERICAN SLANG. Nothing resembled British verbiage, much less aristocratic or historical language. Everything was "Hey! What's up?" "Nuttin. You?" All I could hear when they spoke was one of those American teen comedies where all of the teens are trying to get laid at a party. Not the image you want when reading a historical romance. The behaviors are also modern. While the writer seems to have researched the time period, modern actions that would never have been accepted at that time kept cropping up, like being at a party and hanging on your date's arm with your arm looped through his as the two of you socialize throughout the evening. This would have been an awkward thing to do even for a betrothed couple, but a single young lady doing this with a known rake? The same two people holding hands at a party, kissing each other in front of others, disappearing into shadows to make out, getting caught in embrace often while whispering about sex….how is any of this appropriate for a regency-period story? This is all modern American teenage behavior. Even the older generations were referred to as "pensioners," a very modern term that has no place in the historical setting. The ending was more akin to the Wild West than regency England. An earl and a baron go running around town with sawed-off shotguns and rifles shooting up the place and everyone in their way. Ridiculous! One of the joys of reading historical romances is seeing how a romance would bud within the constraints and social rules at the time. When authors throw the rules out the window to make up their own, there's no point in the story being historical any more. I'm not reading it for the fashion and horse-drawn carriages. I'm reading it for the historical romance, so make it historical! And for the love of all things holy, why does everyone call each other “sweeting”? I developed a twitch every time I saw that word, which was nigh every page. At first it seems just a word used by the hero, which was fine, but before long, everyone in the book was using it with everyone else, be it a sister or a young girl or someone they're courting, or even a total stranger.
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I absolutely adored this book!! After discovering the Knights in Lord of Fire and falling ever so completely in love with Lucien, I enjoyed the other books. While I liked Jacinda and her Billy I still held only Lucien and Miranda above the rest. Until our darling Devil comes along. In Gaelen Foley's 5th book of her Knight Miscellany Series we find that something that she has only hinted at since Lord of Fire.
Lizzie Carlisle is at a loss, her best friend Jacinda has found her marital bliss and Lizzie feels very third wheelish. Her entire life she has been the common ward of an uncommon family. Her deepest desire was to finally get Lord Alec to notice her, to love her and to sweep her off her feet. That way finally making her part of the wondrous Knight family. But Alec's atrocious actions and final betrayal made Lizzie take stock and realize he would never see her as anything other than his Bits..
Devlin Kimball, *sigh* the cad, Devlin otherwise referred to as Devil (yep another devil but still not quite The Devil.. we all know who claims that title *winks at Carmen*) has run from his past for well over a decade. After a playful prank leads to the death of his family, Devil is destroyed.. One adoring aunt, accepted that he must grieve on his terms set him up and sent him on his way. He is finally home and determined to find revenge for the family he adored. Unfortunately (or fortunately) for him Lizzie expects something else.
This story is wonderful, Devil wants revenge and all Lizzie wants is for him to take the time to love the family he has left. To stand by the aunt who has always stood by him. After sending him a note telling Devil that she is on her deathbed he rushes to their side, only to discover Lizzie's machinations an aunt who is alive and kicking and the love of his life.
Yeah, sounds too easy doesn't it? *grins* well we all know that Ms Foley is not known for her "easy" story lines.. and this one has plenty. Secrets and sorrow aplenty. At times you even feel for some of the villains, as they are also victims of their time. But they make choices that destroy rather than uplift and you know that the will continue on their paths of destruction. (Teasing enough?)
Devil and Lizzie not only face his past but hers.. yep the Knight family stands true to their Lizzie and she must face them as well as her heart to realize where she belongs.. and who her true family is. Lizzie is a character so many of us identify with as she always feels like she is on the outside looking in until one day reality strikes and her world is completely turned around..
Excellent Story, Most excellent author
Shauni
Lizzie Carlisle is at a loss, her best friend Jacinda has found her marital bliss and Lizzie feels very third wheelish. Her entire life she has been the common ward of an uncommon family. Her deepest desire was to finally get Lord Alec to notice her, to love her and to sweep her off her feet. That way finally making her part of the wondrous Knight family. But Alec's atrocious actions and final betrayal made Lizzie take stock and realize he would never see her as anything other than his Bits..
Devlin Kimball, *sigh* the cad, Devlin otherwise referred to as Devil (yep another devil but still not quite The Devil.. we all know who claims that title *winks at Carmen*) has run from his past for well over a decade. After a playful prank leads to the death of his family, Devil is destroyed.. One adoring aunt, accepted that he must grieve on his terms set him up and sent him on his way. He is finally home and determined to find revenge for the family he adored. Unfortunately (or fortunately) for him Lizzie expects something else.
This story is wonderful, Devil wants revenge and all Lizzie wants is for him to take the time to love the family he has left. To stand by the aunt who has always stood by him. After sending him a note telling Devil that she is on her deathbed he rushes to their side, only to discover Lizzie's machinations an aunt who is alive and kicking and the love of his life.
Yeah, sounds too easy doesn't it? *grins* well we all know that Ms Foley is not known for her "easy" story lines.. and this one has plenty. Secrets and sorrow aplenty. At times you even feel for some of the villains, as they are also victims of their time. But they make choices that destroy rather than uplift and you know that the will continue on their paths of destruction. (Teasing enough?)
Devil and Lizzie not only face his past but hers.. yep the Knight family stands true to their Lizzie and she must face them as well as her heart to realize where she belongs.. and who her true family is. Lizzie is a character so many of us identify with as she always feels like she is on the outside looking in until one day reality strikes and her world is completely turned around..
Excellent Story, Most excellent author
Shauni
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4.0 out of 5 stars
Solid Foley
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on April 5, 2010Verified Purchase
I've been revisiting Gaelen Foley recently having originally read the Knight Miscellany and Ascension trilogy nearly a decade ago. This was very entertaining and I enjoyed it as much as the first time, perhaps even more (as I can't really remember:)!). I do however remember dear Lizzie Carlisle, her unrequited love for fallen angel Alex and her existence (in her mind) always on the periphery of the family etc. This is a fitting story for her and she finds the perfect foil in delicious Devlin who can finally convince her of her own worth.
Very enjoyable and a fitting addition to this fabulous series of books!
Very enjoyable and a fitting addition to this fabulous series of books!
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Brilliant story!
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on April 3, 2015Verified Purchase
I have enjoyed each of the stories in this excellent series but this has been my favourite.A brilliant story -the opening scene at the Inn as tense and exciting as any novel I've ever read. Dev is a delicious hero and the splendid Lizzie at last gets her own HEA. Cannot recommend highly enough!
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Lyn
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Brilliant!
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on March 17, 2018Verified Purchase
Utterly engaging - had trouble putting it down! Loved all the characters!

Fred Bright
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Three Stars
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on May 13, 2017Verified Purchase
Fine
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audrey.1
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good series
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on April 15, 2014Verified Purchase
I like gaelen foley novels this one is very good and once you pick it up you find it very hard to put it down.
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