- File Size: 2661 KB
- Print Length: 765 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: January 28, 2018
- Sold by: Amazon.com Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B079F4P3DW
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #455,216 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
The Empowered Series Collection, Books 1-3 Kindle Edition
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I want to recognize what the author has accomplished because, hey, you finished the series, the story is internally consistent, and there is a story arc both to the set and within each book... and that's not easy. But you need to slow down. Get into the heads of your characters and the details of the world you're building. Make the characters (and their responses to one another) unique and the world and the working (and individual growth) of the 'empowered' powers your own. Keep writing because readers like me need writers who keep enriching their trade. There is clearly a passion for storytelling here, and practice+life experience will ensure you get better. Don't settle for trite jokes we've all heard. ('denial isn't just a river') If you have to write your character's recognition that something is overused... YOU know it's overused and you aren't pushing yourself to find some kind of wry, actually funny rejoinder or internal commentary If you feel you're not naturally funny, cultivate friends who have odd turns of phrases and read books by writers who create characters that are funny even in serious/stressful situations. Lois McMaster Bujold does this well, so does Jennifer Crusie. Find authors you enjoy reading that do this and your own writing will become more powerful.
I would definitely recommend this series.
Top international reviews
Somehow you’re drawn into the story and can imagine everything that is happening.
The characters are mostly well written though I think the developing romance with Alex lacked adequate explanation.
However, I can’t wait to read the final book.