The Enemy of Good Is Better Paperback – January 27, 2011
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- Publisher : Orchises Press (January 27, 2011)
- Language : English
- Paperback : 96 pages
- ISBN-10 : 1932535241
- ISBN-13 : 978-1932535242
- Item Weight : 4.8 ounces
- Dimensions : 5.5 x 0.25 x 8.25 inches
- Best Sellers Rank: #5,741,829 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)
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The poem "A Song of Spirals" is as good an example as any of Salcman's extraordinary abilities merging, like streams of crystal to form a diamond. It is a poem of astronomical observation ("a milky smear/in which dim stars whirl"), religious reference ("Shiva's arms"), metaphorical imagination ("from star clusters to pine cones/to petals on a stem"), historical awareness (in writing of Leonardo Pisano and rabbits, "In 1202, he wanted to know how many pairs would ensue," the origin of Fibonacci numbers), and most of all, poetic awareness. The latter coalesces in the poem's beautiful final eighteen lines ("Tonight his song of spirals plays in my ear,/in a galaxy of cells hooked like a sea horse"). There is no overstating the skill required to compose a poem so voluminous in its factual background, yet so marvellously and cogently luminous in its pair of pages.
One could write at length of many of the poems in this brilliant volume. "Scenes from a Marriage," "Heat Lightning," and "Turner Sets out in a Snowstorm" are a few poems that any reviewer would be remiss in not mentioning. But in closing let me simply call attention to THE ENEMY OF GOOD IS BETTER as one of the finest volumes of poetry I have read in recent years -- as a poet myself, I read many -- and as a profound tribute to the ideal that poetry, for all its historical convolutions, can still be accessible, direct, and meaningful. For this reader, ENEMY has changed the way I look at the world...and for the BETTER.
I am struggling to avoid the now-cliché of neurosurgeon Michael Salcman's surgical skill as a poet. He's a precisionist of words, rhythm, idea, history, family. We know that. And I don't want to venture into the lie about writing poetry which his wonderful title might suggest. Poetry is NOT brain surgery, something this poet does a day-job. Salcman's poetry has always been good, and now it is even better. So I have made a small poem out of wonderful lines, almost randomly chosen, from his latest (amazing) book, a book which will fascinate any reader who has any interest in common with the author's (see above list of what he's so good at, besides neurosurgery).
Read this extraordinary book--whether you "like poetry" or not!--and you'll see that this "extrapolated poem" is true:
WATCH MICHAEL SALCMAN WORK
If you find the angle at which something
shrinks to nothing, you can get the distance.
A cross of wood, a length of twine and soon
of white-painted plaster on Seventh Street
cools his skull like ice cream;
I hear him cranking the mimeograph drum,
mixing its violet smell
with the odor of oil in the rails of a slide rule--
an aroma as metallic as a brake in a machine shop,
gathered from coalfields, blooming algae
in silt and debris, trapping oyster and crab
in nitrate and shale, drowning life in life.
The Susquehanna flows past ravaged hills,
penises persist beyond all sense and sensation,
even as they do in life. Not the breasts, however.
Of the brain and the rest there's little more to say--
almost nothing survives but fine powder
and a little bone it wears like a cap.
not a scrap was wasted. This was the life he had to give.
What a life is that of Michael Salcman,poet and artist and surgeon, getting better and better, as witnessed by his latest and finest book.
The book's first section meditates on the self's identity as a child, a Jew, a physician, a father, a son, and a friend. Here is a self determined to succeed, who sees his future as "the implacable application of intelligence" and who daydreams of nothing less than "perfect escape." Yet that same self must endure the limitations of reality: a leg shriveled by polio, the bullying of childhood, a heritage of persecution, and the inability--even as a neurosurgeon--to save his father's aging brain or the lives of family and friends.
In the second section, the self examines and contemplates its models of achievement: writers and visual artists who sought or achieved greatness. Beneath this examination, for the poet, lies the dream of acquiring "a place in the universe of wordsmiths" where the self can remain immutable. But the costs and realities of such a dream cannot be ignored: the often oppressive weight of words, the shadows and pain endured by artists as they struggle toward perfection of the work, and the chance that--despite all the struggle--the work will amount to nothing.
The third-section self comes up against even more obstinate realities: time, change, and death. From an elegy to 20th-century Baltimore to a catalogue of what survives of the mummified "long-ago dead," the poems range widely, yet share a common undertone: the knowledge that "all of us / [are] born with an entropy . . ." we cannot escape.
So it goes. The final section begins with the title poem, an admission that, in human relations as in surgery, the striving toward the unimpeachable can lead to a botching of the whole. Here the self that seeks and finds the beauty of love also finds love's imperfection--and the sadness inherent in trying to perfect it. In this imperfect world, love's flaw is that it "never occupies the same moment / of time for any two people."
What, then, of the striving for undying love or fame?
The book's last poem gives us, perhaps, an answer: a painting of a woman by an unknown Flemish artist, an artist whose "bootless fame, free of any personal gain, / has lit [her] face with the grace of anonymity." Here is the self's attempt to come to terms with the fact that its hard-acquired and lovingly tended identity must end--with death's oblivion or, prefigured in section one, its equivalent: "a final music, / the mind set free of memory."
These are good poems; better--they're wise.