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Entwined With You
on June 5, 2013
I agree so much with the first review on this page. I feel as used by the Author should feel about Eva. She is beyond irritating now and the Author throwing in all of these plot twists in a book that covered just a few weeks is so irritating. I am not at all sure I will be on board for anymore. I don't think I want to see the superficial junk this Author thinks makes up the interesting and readable plot lines of a relationship I was really invested in. This junk with Brett is beyond annoying. To think she loves Gideon so much she will do anything for him BUT cannot tell Brett to take a hike?? She says she HATES the girl she was, basically a tramp, and now she walks through a door with Brett and leaves it wide open for him??? I wanted to slap her over and over throughout this book. I am not an Author, but I can think of a lot of plot lines that would be engrossing and interesting and HAVE Eva and Gideon TOGETHER and honestly working things out TOGETHER! EL James books are not that well written but have a much better plot line and ending. Cary is another one I liked and don't anymore. I want to rip Eva and Cary a part and maybe they would grow up!! How many people are SO important to Eva she cannot live without them? And what in the WORLD is Eva doing texting Brett. I can see it now, she will go out to Calif and hook up in some way with Brett, GAG!! There will be some kind of Blackmail by the person who somehow knows what Gideon did and he has to work through that. And he will do these things without telling poor Eva and she will fall apart, AGAIN. But how can he trust her, she is a baby and not truly faithful as she expects him to be!! She does not seem able to say the easiest word in the World if you love someone like she is supposed to love Gideon. To anyone else you say NO and you don't lead them on unless you are a tramp!! And I didn't like her mother before but now I HATE her!! And another plot line that really ticks me off is that Gideon resents his family but now cannot turn away from his mother, has to care so much about his manipulative EX?? Now his mother is going to push for the EX and hate EVA. It is beyond aggravating!!
The more I think about this book the more upset i get that a really good story that has had me waiting with anticipation let me down so badly. Result is I will not be buying any other books by this Author. i will probably finish out the series or at least give it one more shpt but I will not buy into anymore of this Authors work. It is so obviously about getting the most sales and not about good material. I loved these characters and now I don't like Eva at all and feel sorry for Gideon but am impatient with him being such a schmuck.
I wish I could as Sylvia one question especially and it would be if Eva gets so jealous and upset at Gideon for talking to his other ex's how can she justify her wanting any kind of relationship with Brett who blatantly propositioned her and let her know exactly what he wants???