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Fire In His Eyes (Secrets & Seduction Book 1) Kindle Edition
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About the Author
- ASIN : B00HFVMWOO
- Publisher : MJ Nightingale; 2nd edition (December 16, 2013)
- Publication date : December 16, 2013
- Language : English
- File size : 2453 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 244 pages
- Page numbers source ISBN : 1494742896
- Lending : Enabled
- Best Sellers Rank: #934,253 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
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My other huge problem was the complete overuse of their names. Every comment to each other either begins or ends with "Monica" or "Victor". I never read two characters use the others names so much. Whatever the word count of this book is, cut it in half because the other half is their names. Drove me crazy.
Also, Victor really was a jerk. He was only using Monica until his wife took him back! He knew she was in love with him and he was just going to keep her hanging on til it was time to dump her. He knew what he was doing was wrong yet he did it anyway, for far too long in my opinion. It really did make me like him a lot less in the end.
I liked that Monica was already healed at the beginning of the book. She had a life of her own outside their relationship that gave her strength and purpose beyond their love. That allowed her to be strong when she needed to be and supportive when he needed it. It allowed a her feelings to ring true. She didn't need him in her life--she wanted him, which is very different. Victor's character can be polarizing. The author's ability to make us love his tortured soul first allows you the time to listen to his backstory. His determination to do the right thing and to be a good man have you rooting for his happiness.
As her debut novel, there were a few editing errors I would have liked to see cleaned up, but the story line had a good flow that showed both characters' internal conflict and passion. The decision to pace this out over several months did the story justice as it felt more natural. Even if they did fall in bed with lust at first sight. Lots of hot steamy sex scenes, including a wild out of town weekend. The novel ends on a HEA and did have me crying at parts.
Two broken souls find each other when one night when either where looking for any thing . But can they fix each other broken hearts and past or will it be to much for them. Monica sister talk her into going out one night just to have one night of fun But the last thing Monica is looking for is a tall sexy has hell man. But after one look, dance and one sizzling hot kiss Monica is hook .
Victor is not looking for any thing other than a one night stands. But what he does not know is that every thing is going to change. Because after he see Monica and he has one dance and kiss he can't get her out of his mind. But after one sexual smoking hot night with her he try to warn her not to fall in love with him.
I did not want to give to much away in this book because its to sizzling hot not to read . I cant wait to read more from this author. All I can say is this book is WOW , WOW , SIZZLING HOT .
Top reviews from other countries
I have to say the rest of the book DID NOT DISAPPOINT! WOW, it was hot! It was moving! It was riviting! It was passionate! Did I mention HOT? Holy melting knickers...
Right from the start, I was hooked. I didn't want it to end, but I couldn't put it down at the same time.
Monica is still dealing with a horrific event that happened to her years before. Her sister, Ana, is worried that she is starting to slip back into her old reclusive ways, so takes action and drags her out for a night of flirty fun. That was the night she met Victor. He shocked her with his forward nature, but she also found herself turned on by it. I have to say, she wasn't alone!!
When they go out for their first date, Victor is straight with Monica about just what he can and can't/won't offer her. She thinks she can handle his terms, but soon realises that she is out of her depth. Victor is hiding secrets, but she doesn't have any idea what they could be. She doesn't push him in the hope that he will trust her eventually and let her in. He doesn't...
Although their relationship does develop in other ways, there is always a piece of him that Victor holds back. Over time, her sister becomes suspicious and makes Monica ask Victor the questions she has been avoiding. The answers she gets rip her heart out. And mine...
Victor isn't a bad guy, he is trying to deal with things the best way he knows how. He is trying to do the best for his loved ones, but at the same time he is risking his own peace of mind and happiness. He cannot see how his actions are not just making him miserable, but also those that he is intent on protecting also.
I loved how even though I had a fair idea of what Victor was hiding, seeing everything play out and unravel was what kept me riveted. But I could never have imagined the lengths Victor was prepared to go to. He has a sense of loyalty, no matter how screwed up, that you can't help but admire.
There was not one part of this book that I thought was slow. The flow of the storyline was consistent, always making me want to know more, always making me want to turn the page to see what else was uncovered. The different sides to Victor's nature, the developing inner strength of Monica, they all had me glued.
This is M.J. Nightingale's debut novel and on the basis of this book, I will be looking forward to all her other future projects.
I received an ARC in return for an honest review.
if you want a good beginning to end story this is one to get.