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Fire Light (Trinity of Mind) (Volume 1) Paperback – December 6, 2013
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I really enjoyed reading Urban Fantasy, especially Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. So I thought it would be fun to create a New Adult Urban Fantasy series with a male protagonist. I had a short story that I really liked in which my main character, Jake, casts a magic missile. I wanted to turn this short story into a novel and it seemed a perfect fit for this world.
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The beginning establishes Jake's home life. It's a very realistic, everyday setting; it takes a little while for the weird things to start happening. Jake has magical powers that awaken, which draws the attention of mean, nasty creatures, including the Vampire King. There is action, romance, betrayal -- pretty much everything.
It takes place in the Salt Lake Valley and Bountiful. It was fun to read about streets and places I know very well and was able to picture perfectly. While there is humor, the story also gets a bit dark at times, although it does not get very graphic. If you want to support small, indie authors, this one is a gem.
There are kind of a lot of copy editing errors. There's one swear word I noticed in the whole thing.
1) The inciting incident doesn't happen until chapter twelve. For those of you who don't know what an inciting incident is here's the definition. When an event happens to the protagonist forcing their lives to change from the norm to adapt to the story's plot. Pretty much it's the part that kicks the story off and gets the ball rolling. Most writing gurus and creative writing courses teach that an inciting incident should happen in the first act, within the first few chapters in a novel or the first ten pages in a screenplay. If this was a typical epic Fantasy novel like Robert Jordan's "The Eye of the World" the reader would expect this kind of build up because the writer is introducing them to a whole new world. However, the author of "Fire Light" spends the first twelve chapters of the book just getting us acquainted with Jake. We learn about his parentage, his sister, his geek lifestyle and we meet his friends and other supporting characters. All good things to learn as this helps to establish Jake's character, but it drags on a bit. Had I been a beta reader for this book I would've suggested condensing this whole segment to help the story move along more quickly.
2) Just before the story finally picks up, the author forces a love connection between Jake and his sister's best friend Kendra. At this point it was the last thing I wanted to read, I just wanted the fantasy element to happen already. Also, I found Kendra's character weak and inconsistent. She's described as confident but then goes on to do things that make her seem insecure, childish, and desperate. I found it hard to care about her and was relieved when the inciting incident finally arrived and Jake was taken away into another world. I found myself hoping we'd never see Kendra again.
However, once the story took off, it kept on going! The pacing from chapter twelve on was fantastic, keeping you interested and wanting more. Later, another female character was introduced, Alexis, who didn't annoy me and I found I suddenly needed to finish the book more because of her than anything else. The author managed to surprise me in some places and that's not easily done. The author didn't shy away from darker subjects yet kept things somewhat PG-13 with which I was impressed. He kept the dark fantasy world realistic without getting too morbid for young adult readers to enjoy. The ending was action packed and exciting without being too over-the-top or unbelievable. The big climax did not disappoint as many YA books do, and kept me on the edge of my seat to the very end. When it was all said and done I found myself eager to read the next book! Which unfortunately does not yet have a release date set.
Is "Fire Light" a worth while read? Yes. Will I be reading the next book in the series? You betcha! Does it take a while to get going? Sure, but the pay off makes it's well worth the wait. So, overall I'd give "Fire Light" four and a half stars!
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