"'This is a children's narrative. I enjoyed your writing - an African setting works well in a children's book, introducing an entirely new, beautiful, cultural landscape . . . descriptive language used to create setting is lovely ('before the moon showed its face to light up the world, the stars seemed very close to them. Lying on her back, Lera lifted up her arms and tried to catch them in her hands.'). Overall you have a very promising basis for a vivid and engaging world of animal characters."