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Forbidden (The Arotas Series Book 1) Kindle Edition
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When I first started reading it, I almost gave up a few chapters in because the writing was kind of bad.I'm not a huge fan of 1st person present, and it felt like the writing was conflicting with that choice. I decided to give it to 30% and in the end I did finish it.
The writing got better along the way (particularly the dialogue) but there was quite a few grammatical errors and slips in the tense. The biggest problem I had was the POV shifts. For most of the book its Rose, but when it starts to shift to Gabriel and towards the end other characters, for some reason it switches to omniscient. I enjoy that style a lot when it's done right, but in this case wasn't done that well.
I'm on the fence as to whether I will continue or not.
it was obvious to me that the Immortals was a mystery to be revealed later because its the very thing Rose is running from.
I'm not saying its the best book I've ever read, but it was a good read and left me wanting to read more. I found it a refreshing diversion from vampires who sparkle and live on animal blood and vampires who attend vampire school and are called on to battle the forces of evil as literal teenagers. i loved the fact that for a YA book, there was more torture and blood and gore than usual. currently completely immersed in the sequel, I, for one, enjoyed this book and look forward to discovering the rest of Rosaline and Gabriel's story!
However, the grammar was not great. I really liked the book, but was distracted a few times by the mistakes. Possibly, I got a hold of an early release and didn't realize it? I'm not the kind to generally catch errors in books, but a few times I found myself re-reading, or reading aloud trying to figure out the sentence. I found one sentence that the tense changed in the middle, which was just confusing, as I do not anticipate errors in books. Due to the poor grammar I can only give it 3 stars. (To be clear it wasn't atrocious grammar errors, and it wasn't terribly formatted like some ebooks. Just an occasional glaring mistake)
I do really like this book, and I hope in this case I just accidentally got an early release. I believe if this book had gone through the editing room one more time, it would easily be a four (or a strong 4.5) star book!
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WHO THE HE'LL is AMY MILES?!!! And why do I know she's awesome😂😂😂😂 do NOT miss this book💧💧🌂🌈
There are many editing errors though but I will continue to the next book and see if I made a good call