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Foundation: Book One of the Collegium Chronicles (A Valdemar Novel) Hardcover – October 7, 2008
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The new Valdemar novel takes place earlier in the kingdom’s history than has any other, set when the Heralds’ collegium was established. At that time, the system of heraldic training was changing from one-on-one apprenticeship to the collegial system used by Healers and Bards, because there were too many trainees for the old system. Some older Heralds weren’t happy with that change, and as all three collegia rapidly grew, there was much rivalry for builders and teachers. Young Mags, an orphan who drudges for a greedy, cruel mine owner, is Chosen and eventually brought to Haven for training, where his goodheartedness and near-total ignorance make him very dependent on his companion. Thanks to court intrigues and an attempt by foreign infiltrators to trick Valdemar to its disadvantage, Lackey makes a real page-turner out of Mags’ and the collegia’s development. Though similar in some ways to both Brightly Burning (2000) and Take a Thief (2001), this book’s outstanding characters, especially Mags, will greatly please Valdemar fans. --Frieda Murray
Praise for the Collegium Chronicles:
“Returning to her beloved Valdemar universe, Lackey opens her new series at a pivotal time in the history of Valdemar, when the education of Heralds is changing and dangers from other lands are felt in the court and on the training field. Series fans will enjoy the variations on a familiar theme, while enough information is presented for first-timers to discover a world of high adventure and individual courage. Highly recommended.” —Library Journal
“A real page-turner.... Outstanding characters, especially Mags, will greatly please Valdemar fans.” —Booklist
“An enjoyable and pleasant read.... Mags is an appealing protagonist facing challenges (and successes) with which readers will empathize." —RT Book Reviews
"Top Pick! ... A wonderful amalgam of fantasy and character study." —Night Owl Reviews --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.
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Maybe I'm spoiled? The first ML books I read were back in the early 90's. They had a different feel than this. A very different feel. They were grown up and the plot had a real goal fairly early on. In fact, this came off as ML doing Harry Potter, and... ew! Please no!
There isn't much character development, really, which actually confused me by the time I reached the end. I felt like I still didn't know much about the main character, his motives, and usually his feelings. He could've just as well been a dog or cat for as little opinion as he has to anything, and even then I've read books where the main characters are either animal and are still better developed.
I sincerely hope this book is a case of "book one syndrome", as I call it. Meaning the whole purpose of the book is to... well, basically do no more than be an intro. I hate when that happens because I have no real way to know if this is really the pace and style of the whole story or only the first of the series "introducing" the reader.
I seriously hope that's it, because I bought the whole series. Every book except 1 was full price. I hate it when I spend full price and get hosed by a crap story, especially when it's by an author I've otherwise enjoyed before and respect.
We'll see how this goes in the next book, and hopefully the meat of it doesn't get held back until the very end. Because that's lame.
Here, why don't I jot down a few words about the entire series, and not just the first book (no plot spoilers).
Lackey is perhaps best known for her long-running series about the fantasy kingdom Valdemar, and this set of five books are her most recent addition to the saga. The Valdemar books overall don't have to be read in any particular order; the series is made up of both sets of books (usually trilogies) and individual titles that are semi-independent of one another. However, it perhaps makes the most sense to read the stories in chronological order according to the history of the kingdom. The Collegium Chronicles , while the most recently written about Valdemar, take place fairly early in the history of the country.
It's been quite some time since I visited Valdemar, and I was quite happy to go back again. I've enjoyed the previous stories I've read very much, and had been thinking of doing a complete reading of the entire series in chronological order, so I had no problem in jumping in with these, since they detail an earlier portion of the country's time-line.
And---in general, I found the books to be quite enjoyable. I liked the main character and found his adventures to be quite interesting. While reviews for the series were mixed, this was in large part due to the leisurely pace of the stories, with unfinished plot points left hanging at the end of each of the first four volumes. Since these were published at a rate of about one book per year, some readers were very frustrated about all these loose ends regarding the primary plot, which dealt with the mystery of where Mags came from, who he was, and why strangers were hunting him down.
However, since I had the entire stack of books at hand, this wasn't an issue for me---as soon as I finished one I was able to jump right into the next.
Now, Lackey does have quite a knack for getting into her characters' heads, and imagining in complete detail the running commentary that fills their minds as they go about their daily tasks. In one sense this is a plus---we really get to see how these characters think. Problem is---she writes it all down, whether it has anything to do with advancing the plot or not! And this does tend to pad out her books to a certain degree.
I love the stories and fantasy realms Mercedes comes up with---I can only wish I had such an imagination. But I think she suffers from the same problem as a number of other very popular and prolific authors, in that her publisher doesn't seem to edit her any more, and as a result there's a LOT in her books that could be trimmed to make for a much tighter story.
Oh, I don't mind getting a moderate amount of unnecessary detail---I enjoy losing myself in these fantasy worlds. But I do have to admit that when we're talking about the mechanics of quality, first-rate writing, her books would be better with a strong editor at the helm.
For instance---in one of these books, there was a passage written about how the villains were able to hide their wagon from the eyes of the good guys. The description went on in detail for an entire page, but---we simply don't need to know this! It had nothing to do with the plot---just two or three sentences about this would have been quite sufficient.
Now---while each book was of a reasonable length, averaging out to 330 pages or so, all together this story did NOT need five volumes to be told. The text could have been edited and tightened down to four volumes. Heck, the complete tale could probably even have been knocked down to three 400-page books.
So, that is my primary reservation about the stories. But on the other hand, I enjoyed them despite problems in pacing, so I'll happily recommend these for those who enjoy Mercedes' work. There are still a lot of Valdemar books I haven't read yet, and I fully intend to continue on with the series.
Readers of her other novels in Valdemar's will be familiar with the places, people, and magic she uses. If you're a first time reader I feel like the background and history will be missing which would add a richness to this story.
I really like how in each of her stories the main characters are so different from each other, they are very memorable and don't fall into easy tropes. In this story, the main character Mags, is a solemn and reserved person observing more than speaking a lot of the book is very internal. It is refreshing because it's like meditating in a familiar setting (Valdemar's) but seeing it with a new perspective.
However, I'm not fond of the main character's name as trivial as that may sound. It feels like the third instance of using this name. I feel like she could have been more creative in that area.
Overall a great first book. Looking forward to the second.
Five books in this series: Foundation, Intrigues, Changes, Redoubt, and Bastion.
Mags had slaved at the gem mines for as long as he could remember, completely unaware of how unusual his paltry existence was—until some strangers on huge white horses forced their way past the mine owner and carried him away to Haven to become a Herald Trainee.
The remaining books tell us of Mags’ life adjusting to the real world, the friends he makes, and the decisions he makes; setting us up for CLOSER TO HOME of the Herald Spy.