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Fantastic Premise, Under delivered
on February 9, 2012
Loved the premise of the story; angels vs. demons competing for the soles of (wo)man, arguably worth five stars for the concept... however found myself skipping past superfluous passages just to get to the end. Not that the overall writing was so terrible, but found my interest slipping away at times.
Story needed more explanation on the underlying drivers behind why the two male characters were driven to do as they were doing, why they knew each other and left some lose ends, for me. Just lacked that something...