Top critical review
Needs editing, but a pretty good story
January 27, 2016
The writing in this book is rather poor. It is strangely written - mostly in the present tense, although he often switches to past tense in the middle of a sentence and back again. In addition, there are many misspellings, and incorrect word choices (roll vs role, for example). This lack of appropriate editing and proof-reading is a shame, because those errors are distracting to the reader. However, that being said, the story line is pretty good, with some twists and turns, and the book does keep me interested.