- File Size: 319 KB
- Print Length: 24 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Turning Leaves Press (November 3, 2011)
- Publication Date: November 3, 2011
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B0063KJJAI
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #14,854 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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Intuition (a bonus Intangible short story) Kindle Edition
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This is an extremely short story that is well written and thought provoking. Luke and Sera are twin 17 year olds climbing up a mountain for a day of hiking. They both have powers: Sera can heal and Luke can see the future, but cannot change it. Then he sees a vision of his sister dead and the story ends. There is a teaser of the upcoming book Intangible, is about him panicking about her future death and trying to figure out ways to change it.
After reading "Intuition" out loud to several of my children (6-12 years), I asked what they thought would happen. You know, kind of a finish this story type assignment. I didn't read them the teaser from Intangible because it is a little more paranormal and totally not what they would have guessed to be next. One said that Sera should take off her shoes so she was not the person in the vision. Another said not to worry about it because her healing powers were inside her and she would self-heal even if she was dead. The last suggestion was that her brother would get her super healing if she died because they were twins and he would save her; because, "come on, won't these two live forever if they are already different from everyone else?" Not bad, but so not what the author has planned.
Since it is free and quick, it is worth the time to get a taste of J. Meyers writing style which I found concise and fluid. I would definitely read some more from this author and recommend this short story.
Would I/Did I buy it? Free Download
Would I read it again? Probably not
Would I recommend it to friends? Yes
The story is about two twin teenagers, a boy and a girl, who both have special powers. Luke has visions that always come true, and Sera has the power of being able to heal others. Very interesting indeed! It ends with Luke having a vision of his sister's death. I think it's a pretty safe bet that the next book will involve him trying to figure out how to stop this. I will definitely be buying it!
As a YA tale with a supernatural element, I feel that the full length book might be a winner but this bonus story left me frustrated.
This short story is so very well written that in just 16 short pages you find yourself already attached to the characters, picturing the beautiful Vermont mountains in your mind perfectly (and I have never seen them myself, but I now feel like I have), and worrying about things that I won't mention because I do not want to give anything away. This author has a way with words that just pulls you into the story and holds you there until the very last word and even then you just do not want to be let go. It is a very enjoyable short and I recommend it fully.
The only flaw I found to this was not in the story itself. It was in the italics J.Meyer forgot to undo after the last vision Luke has. But it's a small error and only someone as ocd as I am about things will find it a bother.
Because this story is so short, I feel I can't rightfully give it a 5 since there weren't enough pages to give me much of an impression of anything. I do however enjoy the story for what it is.
So I give this book 4 of 5 paws
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Most Recent Customer Reviews
Just the short of it I already like the brother and sister team..I'M excited to read the first see where it goes..recommend the short story it was fascinating..Gina ClaboPublished 11 months ago by Gina Clabo
Absolutely loved this lil story! The author actually gave me the full book 1 awhile back for review, so I read it already, but I still liked this story! Read morePublished 11 months ago by Amazon Customer
Doom; that is what Luke and Sera call it when they are experiencing their special talents. It is more so for Luke because like his sister's ability to heal he also has the ability... Read morePublished 13 months ago by Avid Reader
I wanted to read the rest! I was just getting into the story when it ended. What a tease! I won't be able to sleep until I find out what happened....Published 13 months ago by Kindle Gram
Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. I enjoyed the heck out of this book. The characters are well-drawn and bounce off the page, the voice of the book flows superbly and gripped me... Read morePublished 14 months ago by Billie Dean Shoemate III
I can't wait to see what happens next. In these few pages the author sucked me in and I am getting the book now. I love books where the characters have special powers or senses.Published 18 months ago by Kindle Customer
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