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Overwrought and fairly unbelievable...
on June 2, 2011
This one just did not hit me right. Sounds good coming out of the box, but when you put it together it doesn't quite stand up. Felt as though characterization was all over the place, motivations bouncing without solid anchors to lock them down. Dialogue a fair way into trite territory. Plot -- well, I can take just about anything in terms of the fantastic, but it has to convince me. This one didn't. Plenty of format mistakes made it hard to plow through. I'm giving Locke a couple other chances, but this one did not grab me, sorry to say.
-W.D. Gagliani, author of Savage Nights