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on December 9, 2013
Sadly I've just deleted this from my kindle, only half read. It was an arduous read at the beginning, where I had to keep returning to earlier pages to get clear in my mind how everyone was related. In the end I was forced to write down the family tree and was left wondering if I was developing early onset dementia, until I read some of the other reviews complaining about the same thing. After that the storyline seemed to sag, bogged in extraneous words. Did anyone else have the problem on their kindle where there wasn't a new line for each person speaking?