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- File size : 5366 KB
- Publication date : April 30, 2019
- ASIN : B07QYCTZBV
- Print length : 234 pages
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Language: : English
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Lending : Enabled
- Best Sellers Rank: #323,907 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
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This book was totally let down by an excess of dialogue and description. It felt like I was 30% through and they were standing in the same corridor having the same conversation they were when the book began. The book would have a little spurt of really interesting plot development, and then pages and pages of the description of how people related to each other, or pointless dialogue repeating the same pieces of information.
For large chunks I was reading one sentence per page, but I would love to see it get a hefty edit because the premise has so much promise.
You spoil your wonderful story crafting with poor editing, if it continues you will lose readers.