- File Size: 3377 KB
- Print Length: 44 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: January 5, 2016
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B01A8MUYIC
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #738,574 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
Mail Order Bride - The Backup Bride - American Mail Order Bride Western Romance (American Mail Order Brides Series Book 1) Kindle Edition
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It reads like it was written by a twelve year old. The main plot line is sufficient, but there is no depth to the writing.
Verbs are just left out of sentences. Cookies change to biscuits on the same page. The beginning of Chapter 7 the main character's name changes.
Did anyone edit this? Did the author even read through it before posting it?
Good writing involves who, what, when, where, why, and how. This feels like it covers the what, and about half of the who. Everything else is just absent. There is no description of place and people. No personalities are developed and no emotions explained.
I have read fan fictions from teenagers that were better fleshed out than this.
This is a thoughtful and well written story. The characters are likeable. The children are sweet.