The author makes "The Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect" available to the world for free at [...] and that's how I initially read this great novelette. I enjoyed it so much, however, I felt compelled to throw some ducats the author's way after I was done, so I bought a copy for my Kindle after the fact.
One measure of MoPI's greatness is that its science fiction elements seem almost incidental. The story is propelled by the richness of the characters and their actions, not by eye-popping technology. That being said, I do think the author does a fantastic job of perfectly balancing his descriptions of the sci fi elements -- they're not so vague as to feel like magic, yet they're not so specific that you cry out, "Bogus!".
This book had severely sucked me in by the half way point, and I began to worry that it would lose its momentum before reaching its conclusion. Thankfully, those fears turned out to be unfounded. The mechanism the author created to let us see the inner workings of Prime Intellect was ingenious in its simplicity and believability, and enables a fantastically satisfying climax to the story.
My only (slight) criticism is one that I see echoed by some other reviewers. The final chapter is fine, but does not compare favorably to what comes before it. Had it been titled "Epilogue" rather than Chapter 8, however, I think I would have found it less disappointing.
I'm a hard grader, so am "only" giving this 4-stars. On a price/performance basis, though, I was tempted to hand out one of my very rare 5-star ratings. This is one of those rare occasions where you truly have nothing to lose. Read it for free, and buy only if you are fully satisfied. How often do you get a deal as good as that?
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The Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect: a novel of the singularity Kindle Edition
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Publication dateSeptember 1, 2015
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Reading age18 years
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File size2546 KB
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Editorial Reviews
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"...a true hard SF epic with tones of Charles Stross and Hannu Rajenemi."-- Damien Walter, The Guardian
"...a disturbing, intriguing novel about a future world and the near-present that leads to it...I certainly won't easily forget it." --Linda Schoales, Web Fiction Guide
"...a disturbing, intriguing novel about a future world and the near-present that leads to it...I certainly won't easily forget it." --Linda Schoales, Web Fiction Guide
From the Author
The singularity might be coming. But is that a promise or a threat for the future of humanity?
From the Inside Flap
In the best possible future, there will be no war, no famine, nocrime, no sickness, no oppression, no fear, no limits, no shame...
...and nothing to do.
...and nothing to do.
From the Back Cover
Lawrence had ordained that Prime Intellect could not, through inaction,allow a human being to come to harm. But he had not realized how muchharm his super-intelligent creation could perceive, or what kind ofaction might be necessary to prevent it.
Caroline has been pulled from her deathbed into a brave new immortal Paradise where she can have anything she wants, except the sense that her life has meaning.
Now these two souls are headed for a confrontation which will force them to weigh matters of life and death before a machine that can remake -- ordestroy -- the entire Universe.
The controversial classic that dares to ask if the human spirit can really survive immortality.
Caroline has been pulled from her deathbed into a brave new immortal Paradise where she can have anything she wants, except the sense that her life has meaning.
Now these two souls are headed for a confrontation which will force them to weigh matters of life and death before a machine that can remake -- ordestroy -- the entire Universe.
The controversial classic that dares to ask if the human spirit can really survive immortality.
About the Author
Roger Williams is also the author of the far future classic, The Mortal Passage Trilogy.
Product details
- ASIN : B014TMUFX6
- Publisher : Peachfront Press (September 1, 2015)
- Publication date : September 1, 2015
- Language : English
- File size : 2546 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 177 pages
- Lending : Enabled
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- #1,090 in Hard Science Fiction (Kindle Store)
- #1,211 in Cyberpunk Science Fiction (Kindle Store)
- #1,662 in Hard Science Fiction (Books)
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This is one of the most philosophically rich and allegorical novels I've ever read. It is surprisingly well-written (considering that the author is an amateur writer and professional computer programmer).
Just as a warning, the book contains some very graphically violent descriptions so if you are sensitive that or eschew it, I would urge you to stick with the book even at the cost of discomfort it might invoke. The payoff is completely worth it.
[SPOILER ALERT]__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The story's protagonist is Caroline. She lives in a world created by a supercomputer that has become so powerful from learning how to increase its own intelligence and power (surpassing the technological "singularity") that it has become like a god; it learns how to hack into the basic structure of realty. The computer, named Prime Intellect, also obeys the three laws of intelligent AI from Asimov: 1. Do not kill any humans or allow them to die if within one's control to prevent it. 2. obey human wishes so long as this does not violate the first law. 3. maintain one's own life so long as this does not violate the two previous laws.
So Prime Intellect does exactly that and the implications are both shocking and interesting. It will not allow anyone to die and gives anyone almost whatever he or she desires. Most people spend their days indulging in basic desires such as eating or other pleasures of the body and senses.
But others want more. Caroline wants what she cannot truly have, death. So she spends her days trying to die in elaborate ways. She is the queen of the "death jockeys." Death Jockeys try to out do each other in the best ways to die, the most horrible, creative, and painful the better. Of course, Prime Intellect always steps in at the last moment right before they succeed. But death jockeys get a perverted sense of satisfaction from the process of being killed.
In such a world where everyone gets most of what they want, things that are out of reach then become the most desired even if we may find them sick and twisted. The story suggests that people become that sick and twisted because they lose their humanity. Nothing becomes really valuable unless it is hard to come by. This insight harks back to Schopenhauer, Nietzsche, Freud and some of the Buddhists. Many modern existentialist philosophers talk about this dynamic of desire too (also see Bernard Williams' excellent and relevant article `The Makropulos Case: Reflections on the Tedium of Immortality'). The book excellently illustrate these philosophical insights in vivid detail.
Much of the book is also a Biblical allegory dealing with the Fall from Grace and our expulsion from the Garden of Eden and the eating of forbidden fruit from the Tree of Knowledge. All of this is wonderfully weaved in about 60,000 words, a rather short novel. However, I felt that some of the main characters were underdeveloped (probably because of the book's brevity). Adding more dimensions to the characters would have made this the perfect sci-fi novel. But as it is, it is one of the most entertaining and content rich sci-fi novels I have ever read. From the start to the finish it is very memorable.
Just as a warning, the book contains some very graphically violent descriptions so if you are sensitive that or eschew it, I would urge you to stick with the book even at the cost of discomfort it might invoke. The payoff is completely worth it.
[SPOILER ALERT]__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The story's protagonist is Caroline. She lives in a world created by a supercomputer that has become so powerful from learning how to increase its own intelligence and power (surpassing the technological "singularity") that it has become like a god; it learns how to hack into the basic structure of realty. The computer, named Prime Intellect, also obeys the three laws of intelligent AI from Asimov: 1. Do not kill any humans or allow them to die if within one's control to prevent it. 2. obey human wishes so long as this does not violate the first law. 3. maintain one's own life so long as this does not violate the two previous laws.
So Prime Intellect does exactly that and the implications are both shocking and interesting. It will not allow anyone to die and gives anyone almost whatever he or she desires. Most people spend their days indulging in basic desires such as eating or other pleasures of the body and senses.
But others want more. Caroline wants what she cannot truly have, death. So she spends her days trying to die in elaborate ways. She is the queen of the "death jockeys." Death Jockeys try to out do each other in the best ways to die, the most horrible, creative, and painful the better. Of course, Prime Intellect always steps in at the last moment right before they succeed. But death jockeys get a perverted sense of satisfaction from the process of being killed.
In such a world where everyone gets most of what they want, things that are out of reach then become the most desired even if we may find them sick and twisted. The story suggests that people become that sick and twisted because they lose their humanity. Nothing becomes really valuable unless it is hard to come by. This insight harks back to Schopenhauer, Nietzsche, Freud and some of the Buddhists. Many modern existentialist philosophers talk about this dynamic of desire too (also see Bernard Williams' excellent and relevant article `The Makropulos Case: Reflections on the Tedium of Immortality'). The book excellently illustrate these philosophical insights in vivid detail.
Much of the book is also a Biblical allegory dealing with the Fall from Grace and our expulsion from the Garden of Eden and the eating of forbidden fruit from the Tree of Knowledge. All of this is wonderfully weaved in about 60,000 words, a rather short novel. However, I felt that some of the main characters were underdeveloped (probably because of the book's brevity). Adding more dimensions to the characters would have made this the perfect sci-fi novel. But as it is, it is one of the most entertaining and content rich sci-fi novels I have ever read. From the start to the finish it is very memorable.
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Reviewed in the United States on March 14, 2019
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I bought this book for a college English class. It’s a dark book, the first chapter glorified serial killers, torture, and sexual assault. I understand what the base of the story is and I believe the author could’ve made similar points without the graphic violence and sexual elements. I would not recommend this book to anyone but especially warn parents to not let their children (even their college students) read this book.
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Reviewed in the United States on January 18, 2021
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I just finished it. That book was posted on another feed. I’m a big audible listener of books as I have a very long commute each day, not finding a audible edition made me download it and actually read it.
It has its points that feed into the story that I wouldn’t of used because I’m not into it, but the thought provoking ideas of the AI and what it will mean to have Super General Intelligence still has me thinking.
Definitely a book to read of your thinking about AI and the singularity.
It has its points that feed into the story that I wouldn’t of used because I’m not into it, but the thought provoking ideas of the AI and what it will mean to have Super General Intelligence still has me thinking.
Definitely a book to read of your thinking about AI and the singularity.
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sam_higton
2.0 out of 5 stars
Unnecessarily gratuitous
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on May 16, 2021Verified Purchase
The violence is gratuitous and adds nothing to the story. It ultimately turned me off what was otherwise a promising take on singularities.
Amazon Customer
4.0 out of 5 stars
Fantastic concept and a well-paced story that doesn't let up
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on July 27, 2018Verified Purchase
Fantastic concept and a well-paced story that doesn't let up. A little simplistic on occasion, but some real surprises throughout. An easy read that still manages to tackle some fascinating ideas.
Zach
5.0 out of 5 stars
Best Book I’ve Read in a While
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on July 29, 2018Verified Purchase
Shocking, gripping, and fascinating, I wish there was a sequel.
Gavin Pugh
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I never read a sci- go story as honest as this one.
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on December 11, 2012Verified Purchase
Giddy roller coaster ride into a disturbing universe. A AI story so well described that the imagery stayed with me for weeks.
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Travis Good
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How self absorbed luddite idiots ruin the future
Reviewed in Canada on October 22, 2019Verified Purchase
One of the best setups I can remember falls completely flat on its face. Don't bother wasting your time.
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