- File Size: 2371 KB
- Print Length: 44 pages
- Publication Date: October 1, 2016
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B01M0BYQXK
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,160,446 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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The Mirror In My Dorm Room (A Time Travel Story) Kindle Edition
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It's a short read so you will get through it quickly, but like another reviewer stated, it was repetitive and I was annoyed that every detail was added in, even if it wasn't necessary. Every action and conversation should always add to the story, but in this case it was all filler. Rather than saying, "I stopped by the coffee shop on my way to class and ran into a friend on the way there. We caught up a bit, ordered our coffee, and then left for class," the author chose to write out the entire conversation they had. It was all very unnecessary and annoying for me.
The plot was interesting enough for me to finish the book, especially since it was so short, but I would not recommend this book unless you're reading it for free.
I found several editing issues within the work which was a shame since I really liked the storyline. Although the book was short, the author manages to include many references to the timeframe she writes about. The plot is created with care, and it is apparent that the work has been researched.
I recommend this book to people who like to read short stories about time travel.
I took this book because it was a short story and it was time travel. I love reading both so it was right up my alley. This book had a good story to tell, but the writing itself lacked. The problems in Grammar, punctuation, and repetitiveness all really hurt this story. It seemed like most of the story was just repeating phrases so as to fill space. It probably would have been half the length if all the extra things were taken out.
Honestly, the story of time travel was a good tale, I just wished the story was written better.