The story was way too long. Endless pages of him not being good enough for her. Of him teasing her by playing with her, then blowing her off. Of thinking her brother was going to kill him. Over. And over. And over again.
He wants her, he won’t let himself have her, but won’t let her be happy with someone else.
Most of the way thru she is pathetically willing to accept his hot/cold attitude and keep coming back for more abuse. Fortunately she became stronger near the end.
He didn’t. Instead he stayed a bit schizo. He wanted her, but wasn’t good enough for her. She’d never forgive him, but he had to have her. He kept his guilt and his ‘I’m not good enough for her’ attitude all the way thru, while insisting she was his and that he had to win her back.
If I were her I’d be worried about this. Men tend to try to fill such delusions with booze, drugs, and endless women. If they want a chance to succeed he needs some therapy to help him work thru his worthlessness.
Unfortunately, for me, he was pretty wimpy and not an H. It’s sad when the woman in the story is stronger than the man.
Add in the typo problems like: ‘his breath harsh against his ears’, (I’d think this would be a little difficult since there was only one He involved), and that sealed the rating. For me, all of the above made this a poor read. Since there isn’t a 0 rating, I try to save the 1 star for cheaters and horribly bad stories, so had to give this a 2. It looks like I received a few others by this author for free, so I guess I’ll try another one. Fingers crossed.
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