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The Negative Trait Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide to Character Flaws (Writers Helping Writers Series) Paperback – September 24, 2013

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Crafting likable, interesting characters is a balancing act, and finding that perfect mix of strengths and weaknesses can be difficult. But the task has become easier thanks to The Negative Trait Thesaurus. Through its flaw-centric exploration of character arc, motivation, emotional wounds, and basic needs, writers will learn which flaws make the most sense for their heroes, villains, and other members of the story’s cast. This book’s vast collection of flaws will help writers to explore the possible causes, attitudes, behaviors, thoughts, and related emotions behind their characters’ weaknesses so they can be written effectively and realistically. Common characterization pitfalls and methods to avoid them are also included, along with invaluable downloadable tools to aid in character creation. Written in list format and fully indexed, this brainstorming resource is perfect for creating deep, flawed characters that readers will relate to.


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"In these brilliantly conceived, superbly organized and astonishingly thorough volumes, Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi have created an invaluable resource for writers and storytellers. Whether you are searching for new and unique ways to add and define characters, or brainstorming methods for revealing those characters without resorting to clichés, it is hard to imagine two more powerful tools for adding depth and dimension to your screenplays, novels or plays."

~ Michael Hauge, Hollywood Script Consultant and Story Expert, author of Writing Screenplays That Sell

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Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi are bestselling authors, writing coaches, and international speakers. Their books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. Angela and Becca also co-founded their popular Writers Helping Writers site, a hub where authors can hone their craft, as well as One Stop For Writers, an innovative online library built to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ JADD Publishing (September 24, 2013)
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • Paperback ‏ : ‎ 273 pages
  • ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 0989772500
  • ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0989772501
  • Item Weight ‏ : ‎ 1.06 pounds
  • Dimensions ‏ : ‎ 7 x 0.62 x 10 inches
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Customers find the book's content useful and helpful for adding new life to their fiction. They also say it's not simply a compendium of flaws, but a complete guide to the associated behaviors. Readers also mention that the book is simple enough to understand with plenty of details.

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Customers find the book's content useful, comprehensive, and easy to read. They say it breaks things down to help build up their characters better, and it has a wonderful introduction that goes into detail on character flaws. Readers also mention that the book helps add new life to their fiction with a handy worksheet. They also say it's not simply a compendium of flaw, but a complete guide to the associated behaviors.

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Customers find the book helpful for figuring out characters, especially based on flaws and negative traits. They say it works for both heroes and villains to make for well-runded characters. Readers also mention the book is concise and to the point.

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Reviewed in the United States on May 6, 2014
I love this book. It will not only help you come up with flaws for your characters, but it has methods for character building as well. Not to say it is a book on character building, but it does give some techniques that are very helpful for understanding how character traits effect needs, and wants, which in turn will give your character drive. I found that especially helpful.

She discusses the five needs and lies that are basic; Physiological, Safety and Security, Love and belonging, Esteem and Recognition and Self-Actualization.She then goes on to list many needs that fall under each category and lists a group of corresponding lies that a character might use as excuses for not fulfilling his needs. i.e. Love and Belonging category: Need- {Finding a Spouse} corresponding lie could be (I don't want any attachments, or no one will be interested in someone as screwed up as me.) there are many given needs and wants and many corresponding lies so you can choose from any of them to suit your story. The key is understanding WHY your character would have those needs and wants, and why would he/she choose to react negatively or positively with that reaction.

There is a reverse back story tool that is very helpful for determining your character's needs and lies. It starts with the characters goals and takes you through several emotional steps until you work out the reason the character came to make his decisions.

It provides a character pyramid that helps you see the structure of your character's traits as they form layers of his personality.

I think every writer should have this book. I think every writer should have all three. The emotional Thesaurus is different from the positive and negative trait thesaurus. The Trait thesauri help you to create complex yet sound characters. The Emotion's Thesaurus focus on how a character feels at a particular moment, and when she is experiencing that emotion what is likely happening physiologically, emotionally, externally, certain speech patterns. It gives associated emotions, so if grief is not exactly what you are looking for you can click on anguish and see if that is a better fit, and read what an anguished person looks and sounds like.

If you want to build negative characters, you can get by on just the Negative Trait Thesaurus If you are building a Pollyanna go with the Positive Traits Thesaurus but If you want emotionally rich complete characters I highly recommend you buy all three. I am not a book reviewer or a friend, or reading a copy and I don't review books that often. When I do it is because they are in my opinion outstanding contributions and I want to help other people know what they will be purchasing.
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Reviewed in the United States on November 15, 2013
Want to create true to life, fleshed-out characters? Start here. These two authors deliver. They show you how characters are the story and how to develop them for maximum effect in your own book.

The first part of the book states that everyone is damaged, and the more emotionally traumatic the better. They tell you why negative traits, wounds and flaws are essential for character arcs, how to build them, and how they can be fit to make the journey harder and more meaningful. They also cover that people who are wounded form lies they believe (Ex. I'll never be a good mother.), which stems from one of the five basic needs. (Sorry, too long to list.)

The second part lists flaws alphabetically. They cover definition, similar flaws, possible causes, associated behaviors and attitudes, associated thoughts, associated emotions, positive aspects, negative aspects, examples from film, overcoming this trait as a major flaw, and traits in supporting characters that may cause conflict. I read through each flaw and was surprised when my characters became fleshed out in my head. I knew what they were thinking and what caused it.

We can all think of various flaws we want our characters to have (selfish, stubborn, reckless, etc.), but it is invaluable to have ALL the flaws listed out, so you can find the one your brain forgot, under that pile bills and junk mail, that adds the critical pulse to your character and brings your story to life.

You might even find yourself identifying with flaws and eagerly turning to 'Overcoming this trait as a major Flaw'. It's like a mini therapy session. Acknowledge and correct.

All in all, this book is worthy of a spot on your shelf, if just for having a complete list of flaws at your fingertips. I also highly recommend their other two books: The Emotion Thesaurus and The Positive Trait Thesaurus.
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Reviewed in the United States on January 17, 2014
Every writer needs both the Positive Trait Thesaurus and the Negative Trait Thesaurus. They go together. Add in the Emotion Thesaurus and the great downloads and extras these talented writers give you on their website (which add up to another fabulous book on their own) and you probably won't need too many other books on the craft of writing. A good dictionary and a Synonym finder and you are all set.

I have bought all three "Thesauruses" and loved them so much I bought all three for my Kindle too so I can have them on the move and when travelling. These Thesauruses are exceptionally well organised and contain huge amounts of information in a concise and practical format.

You could just leap in and pick a handful of traits to apply to your character(s) and they would still be better off than when you started. However, taking the time to read through the "users guide" chapters will add so much to your understanding of how to craft truly memorable characters that it is well worth the time invested to do this. Then use the listings to pick and choose traits and counter-traits and the ways in which they would possibly be exhibited to start building a team of people that will resonate with readers. Also use the listings to develop conflict between characters in a psychological way by giving each person traits that would "irritate" or "confuse" the other - much more subtle than the standard good guy VS bad guy.

I can't rate these books highly enough. I know I'm going to be buying them again every couple of years as they become tatty and worn out with daily use!
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Reviewed in the United States on November 19, 2023
I love this series and this book is great
Reviewed in the United States on January 12, 2024
It's clear that a lot of research and analysis went into this little book. The details about each trait provoke thought and new perceptions of one's characters. I was stuck on writing a character arc for my secondary character and this tool unstuck me.
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Char 55
5.0 out of 5 stars Any Authors Go To!
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on September 25, 2023
I love this series of books. Such an extensive, in depth tool for writers.
Dale M Rutherford
5.0 out of 5 stars An Amazing Author Aid
Reviewed in Canada on May 5, 2020
As an author sometimes I struggle to come up with authentic sounding phrases and descriptions of places, people and so on. This set of books - Character Traits (2) and Settings (2) are a fantastic aid. If you want to deepen your readers' experience and give them true and believable characters and amazing worlds and settings you will love these books too.
Cristina
4.0 out of 5 stars A good resource as well
Reviewed in Mexico on June 8, 2018
I still need to put it to good use, but it does have a good description to guide me to define a character
realeyes88
2.0 out of 5 stars Nothing you didn't already know
Reviewed in Germany on April 18, 2018
Unlike the setting books of this series, this book adds nothing that you wouldn't already know if you were a vivid reader or watch tv.
It serves the same function as thesaurus, but in book form and you have to buy it.
I scanned through it and now it's on the attic, cause unless you really are a beginner you won't need this book.
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Supralo
5.0 out of 5 stars Parfait
Reviewed in France on January 16, 2018
Très bon livre pour développer les défauts des personnages, avec des bonnes analyses et des pistes pour aller plus loin. Dommage qu'il n'y ait pas d'équivalent (ou alors je ne l'ai pas encore trouvé!)
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