- File Size: 203 KB
- Print Length: 22 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Porcupine Publications (June 8, 2011)
- Publication Date: June 8, 2011
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00558UWS2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,878,775 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
Ouija Be My Friend? - Horror and Mystery Short Story Kindle Edition
"Children of Blood and Bone"
Tomi Adeyemi conjures a stunning world of dark magic and danger in her West African-inspired fantasy debut. Learn more
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Unfortunately I found the characters a bit flat. I didn't connect with them or like them. I also have a very hard time with the dialog used for Catherine and Rita. It was forced and actually comical at times - times that weren't meant to be funny. I feel the author was trying too hard to make the tween girls sound young and over shot it immensely.
I downloaded this as a freebie and feel it was a fun read. It would be even better with a rewrite.
It was a decent story, aimed completely at young adults. But the main characters attitudes and swearing got on my nerves. There was no need for it.
The editing for Kindle was also a little off. No paragraph breaks and whatnot to signify that it was the next day/next week, and both characters dialogue ran into each other a few times.
It was a nice (although a little predictable) story, which could be found in one of those collection of scary stories books. But what ruined it for me was the editing and the snotty attitude of the girls.
2.5/5 from me.
Now, if grandpa had killed the little twits with the Ouija board at the end, THAT would have been a story.
That didn't really happen here. Two bored sisters decide to play with a Ouija board and, yes, it does allow them to connect to a spirit. The characters aren't presented with any level of depth or originality and things progress pretty much as you would expect.