- File Size: 815 KB
- Print Length: 51 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Evernight Publishing (April 5, 2016)
- Publication Date: April 5, 2016
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B01DVC82SA
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Not Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank:
Out with a Bang (Romance on the Go) Kindle Edition
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This is an interesting short story about how three people who work exceedingly well together come together in a ménage. I really liked how both Grey and Barrett were different men – Barrett the dominant, strong-alpha type of character and Grey the caring-but-disorganized style of guy. Each type of character are tried-and-true hero material and it was quite refreshing that the set-up wasn’t two alpha-males sharing a woman – or one alpha and one submissive. This difference made me feel as if the very-well-used plot (three people working well together moving that business relationship into the bedroom) was fresh and looked at from a different angle. And this freshness helped me enjoy the book immensely.
I felt the story lagged a bit at the start. I love short stories, but the pacing is critical to my mind. The action – and sexual chemistry – needs to move quickly so I don’t feel like there’s wasted time in the story. When you have a shorter length to work with, having a whole chapter of “set up” or background can sometimes have me feel as a reader as if that groundwork is wasted. I knew from the first couple of pages that Laura, Grey and Barrett worked really well as a team in their business. I wanted to read how they moved that professional relationship into a romantic one – and a whole lot of backstory didn’t serve that purpose to my mind. I found myself rushing, wanting to get to where Laura finally made a move and the threesome started to change the dynamics of their relationship.
The sex scene between the threesome was deliciously hot and explicit, well worth the wait to my mind. I loved how all the threads of the plot were woven seamlessly together, leaving me with a feeling of a solid story fully closed and a satisfying Happy Ever After ending. I definitely feel like the story ended on a high note and one that left a smile on my face.
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So these two dominant males wait 5 years for Laura to make the first move knowing very well her shy nature wouldn't allow her to do so. They love her, want her, but still have conquests while they wait for her to make said move. In chapter five, Barrett could tell by Laura's expression she was expecting to be asked out by Grey. I'm sorry but the five-year-plan should've went out the window long before it did. They knew she was interested so the Doms should've stepped up to the plate well before chapter 9.
With that said, once they realized they were losing her, the gloves came off. The Doms definitely took charge. THANK F...K!!
To sum up certain pivotal chapters, I've named them which I think gives you as idea what's in store before you read them. And, oh, YOU SHOULD READ THEM!
Chapter 11: It's time to get down and dirty......talk!
Chapter 12: The fun's just beginning....
Chapter 13: May I lend you a hand?
I could name them all but I think the ones above might've sparked some interest so, with that in mind, my job is now complete.
They give you everything you need and then some… I love Sarah Marsh and her approach to sex scenes… she can make the simplest scene hotter than most…
Laura is in love with her HOT bosses Greyson and Barrett… While trying to hide their feelings for each other; haters try to get in the way…
Got get this short story I promise you’ll like it… I read while on the treadmill and helped me get my 45 minutes
I promise you all will fall for these two hot men and wish you were the ham in that man sandwich…