- File Size: 954 KB
- Print Length: 73 pages
- Publisher: Immortal Ink Publishing, LLC (June 15, 2012)
- Publication Date: June 15, 2012
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B008UVAEXO
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Not Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,289,193 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
The Portrait of Alatiel Salazar (a Gothic Horror Novella) Kindle Edition
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If I didn't know any better I'd have said this book was written years ago...back when the Gothic style was first created. Katriel hit the nail on the head with his use of language and presentation. I was drawn into the story right from the beginning and didn't want to pull away until it ended (I slept somewhere in the middle since it was late at night, but that doesn't count).
When I met Alatiel for the first time, I didn't know what to think. I just knew with her presence came trouble. I was right. The horror left in her wake is painted beautifully and unexpected. These moments were some of my favorite in the whole piece. This skill along with Steven's ability to set up the scene in my mind lead to a feeling that I was in the story. I could see everything as it was happening, vividly.
This novella has surpassed my expectations in story and writing style. For this it has jumped high on my list of great books. This is an especially tough accomplishment considering it's a novella. In around 21,000 words, it has changed the way I view the horror genre, and novella's in general.
I would jump at the chance to read more of this author's work in the future. That's for sure.
Characters: The characters that inhabit "The Portrait of Alatiel Salazar" are so real that you can feel the threat of the situations befalling them, and actually care that it is happening. This is a special treat for me. Truth be told, I do not like period pieces and this one is set in the 1880's. I am not a big history buff. It bores me. So a writer of a period novella will have to go the extra mile to make characters so believable, I think I know them. Mr. Katriel has peopled his story with great characters. I especially love the enigmatic Cristian Salazar, who was built to legendary status by the time I met him in the book. I wanted to know what this guy was all about. I was not disappointed. Mr. Katriel has earned me as a loyal reader because of his characters.
Mood: The mood that Mr. Katriel creates in his writing reminds me of Peter Straub in the early years. In this story, a cemetery is overgrown with wildflowers and nettles around the tombstones, "...to disturb the sterile dignity of the dead." Birds make sounds that "...eerily sound like human voices." There is so much more that brings an eerie mood to this story. I fear revealing too much. Creating a proper mood for the story is a hard thing for a writer to do unless they are truly thinking about it all of the time. Again, Mr. Katriel hits it out of the park with this.
I have nothing but praise for Steven Katriel's haunting tale. On one part it actually kept me up, and I had to watch a little TV in order to put myself to sleep. Writer's are hard pressed to be able to do that to me anymore after all of the sinister stories I have read in my life. That is why I would recommend "The Portrait of Alatiel Salazar" to anyone who likes their reads a little on the creepy side. Pick it up as soon as possible!
Writing Style: Mr. Katriel's choice of wording and voice give a very creepy overall feel throughout the book. He sets the horrific ambiance well. The novella is written in a Victorian style which is around the time the story is set in. I would have to say this is my favorite part about the story.
Characters: Even in the beginning which focuses on series of journal entries you can still get a feel for even the tertiary characters. My heart aches for Gabriel and what he has to endure throughout the novel. Alatiel is intriguing and horrifying all at once.
Confusion: This may be because I am used to reading more fantasy, but I never really understood what Alatiel or a few of the other characters were. The is a point in the story where another character tells Gabriel what he knows of them, but this still only gives me a very vague sense. Also there were a couple of times that I got confused at what was going on in the story. Still this may be because I don't read a lot of this type of story. The ones I have to compare to are Dracula and a Picture of Dorian Gray. Those two stories I knew before I read the books, so it may just be me.
Overall: I would definitely recommend this book, especially is you want something to run chills down your spine in cerebral way. There or no cheap thrills in this book.
Two men in their circle react strangely when Julian presents his new muse. Callum Flynn, a dreadful poet, leaves immediately and without explanation. Helena's boyfriend and mediocre painter, Gabriel Holland, feigns concern for Flynn and backs away from the table with such suddenness that he knocks his chair over. Helena remains behind with Julian and their friend Daniele Navarro, who is given the first turn with the girl. From the moment that Julian takes Alatiel by the arm and pushes her forward for inspection by his friends, life for everyone who has seen the frail mute descends steadily into a hellish nightmare.
But the narrator hasn't come across Helena's tale by accident. The curse did not start at the artists' table, or even with Julian's flaky association with occult painter Cristian Salazar, whom the narrator knows to be Alatiel's father. The narrator is the one who angered the Salazar family, and he is the one upon whom the young demon is taking revenge.
Set in England, in the late 19th century, The Portrait of Alatiel Salazar is a gothic novella in the tradition of Edgar Allen Poe.Read more ›
Most Recent Customer Reviews
I had heard of this book when it was released and happened across it by accident when google searching "gothic horror" images. Read morePublished on April 9, 2014 by Susanna Brooke
This work could easily have been written in the 19th century! If you enjoy classic Gothic horror, I strongly recommend you read this. Read morePublished on March 27, 2013 by Mark Abrams
This novella has the cadence of a good old 19th century gothic horror story. It's not terribly frightening by today's standards. Read morePublished on March 6, 2013 by Irenic
I bought this on recommendation from some awesome bibliophiles. And (in between trilogy & quadrilogy saga reading), I am totally enthralled & "feeling the creeping horror". Read morePublished on February 8, 2013 by Mari-Clare
First off let me just say that the cover of this novella reminds me of a Lady Gaga music video!! It's weird and creepy, and is a beautiful impression of what to expect under the... Read morePublished on November 27, 2012 by Roxy Kade
In the spirit of full disclosure I received a free PDF in exchange for an honest review.
This novel is a Gothic/Horror/Paranormal /Fantasy, and definitely keeps you on... Read more
Let me begin by saying that Katriel is beyond gifted in painting a Victorian picture. From his descriptions of buildings, homes, and even his vernacular you were instantly drawn... Read morePublished on August 20, 2012 by RavenWriter
The Basics: I'm a Victorian junkie. Oscar Wilde is my hero. I worship Jane Austen. Dostoyevsky (okay, he's not Victorian; shh) is my god. Read more
I got about halfway through this novella. While the writing is decently good, I had a hard time keeping the characters and the story straight and I never really got connected to... Read morePublished on August 14, 2012 by C. Weese
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