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- Print Length: 167 pages
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- Publication Date: October 15, 2014
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- Language: English
- ASIN: B00OKT0NQI
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The romantic tale part comes in the form of Juanita, daughter of a boat owner who brings 'putas' (prostitutes) to the island for use of prison guards and some of the prisoners who are able to afford it. Christopher meets and forms a relationship with Juanita resulting in their planning to marry if he can escape from the island and return home to the US.
If you can ignore all the errors, the story is not bad. For this many 5 star reviews, clearly many readers are totally undiscerning or have no real knowledge of English. Frequent misuse of a possessive apostrophe is an irritation. Frequent simple errors such as misplaced commas, words missing, or incorrect word usage simply makes it clear that no professional editing was done - or the editor was somebody who was not an English major, not a professional editor or publisher, or not at all discerning.
Think I'm exaggerating? Here's a sample from where I became irritated enough to start marking. Note for the authors, if you're smart, you'll take this and at least correct these errors, if not go back and read from the beginning and fix all the many other errors. I know, errors happen to all of us, non are perfect, but this many? Really?
If you don't see the errors in all these, you are clearly not an English major, likely not even an English minor, and absolutely not discerning.
When Leon looks at his wife or Miguel’s young daughter’s he sees Daniel’s sister.
He says, “Master Jojo reminds us ‘dead men don’t breath.’
The souls of his feet are pressed together.
Pealing a banana that has fallen, amazingly at her feet, Juanita breaks off half and hands it to him.
Peaking over her shoulder, watching with interest, Christopher can see Juanita’s white swan.
... he takes note of the jam stain on the front Fat Luis’s shirt.
Christopher is stunned. Contact with fisherman? A dream comes true.
Air sparkles, the white swan peaks over her shoulder.
She has eases my burdens in countless ways.
Christopher takes deep breath, to relive his parents anguish, his stupidity and the duplicity of the tuck and roll owner.
Troubled by her silence Christopher’s says, “What the heck Juanita!
Lightening blinds him.
It’s shattering to realize he was so wrapped up in his feelings for Juanita he did not translated, decipher, the danger to him, to her and their future.
They are in-tact along with the bottle of champagne.
The gates of the town remain securely lock.
He taught a handful of me the protocols beginning with “turn off the power!”
The observant eyes of El Jefe, no longer fall on Checo’s maintenance crew.
The simple comment, a poor reflection of his man hood, burned into his memory.
He hand hands the leather stick back to El Jefe.
The first chair, an old fashion stool of leather cushions and handles ...
A well nourish American filled with strength and vitality.
Christopher’s thinks my world no longer rotates around a small patch of real estate.
The bus roars to life. Jerking between gears and belching smoke it agonizingly slow it pulls out of the bus terminal.
Nearby two boys are beating a tree trunk with sticks. Women hang out wash. Old men sleep on the porch with one eye open.
Out of the corner of his eye he watches as the girl move through her kitchen chores.
... a six pack of water, soda’s, a fresh pair of socks ...
Chips of starlight fall around them. He and Juanita are stand hand in hand.
The dream inhabits him a place in his soul; large and small.
... Juanita and her swan, the star shine, over and over again he tries to recapture the moment.
The white swan stood peaking over Juanita’s shoulder at him.
“They don’t pay me enough to take attitude off an illegal.”
Reviews from Billy Blue and crew of the Wave make Christopher’s cheeks heat red with pleasure and embarrassment.
Have read other works by Jennifer and enjoyed them and this one along with her husband sounded like a good read also.
Found the trip to Mexico exciting as I've never visited there and it's very detailed descriptions bring a picture of the area in my mind.
Starts out with Christopher and on his 18th birthday as he's saved his money he heads to Mexico to get a special interior for his muscle car.
He runs into problems, so many that he ends up in a prison, on an island. He meets many along the way and I enjoyed the travel and story behind it all
and how it all comes full circle. Enjoyed the references to the animals and auras. Just when he's about to become free a special friend goes missing...
Enjoyed the martial arts and mystic exchanges. He watches man give up hope to ever having a real life again and now he really has nothng to live for....
On the dawn of his escape, a hurricane strikes, and he believes that Juanita is lost at sea. Bereft, he nonetheless continues his plan to get away from the isolated island.
Redemption’s Warrior by Jennifer Morse is a profound tale of spiritual belief and young love, and how it prevails despite the efforts of those around them to prevent it. The author takes readers deep inside the spirit world in a story that is combines elements of the real effortlessly with the metaphysical. While it gets off to a weak start, providing information that would be better revealed later in the story, and ends with no explanation of how Juanita survived the hurricane, it is nonetheless a compelling story that is very enjoyable.