I have to agree with another reviewer that this book was very word-y...That's why I couldn't connect with the main characters. Lune, we are being led to believe, is supposed to be this tough figure/fighter, yet she gets beat up every other chapter. Plus her angst is never ending in a constant flurry of tears and screaming....Ooookkk....Her love interest, Bren, is basically portrayed as this pretty boy who's always there when Lune needs rescuing. And I mean, always in the nick of time... She's always "swooning" when he's near, and their flirty banter made it impossible for me to believe any real feelings that should first grow before the "I love yous/want yous" . I also don't understand other characters thrown in that barely had real meaning. Asher, who is supposedly her best friend, is hardly mentioned in the story after the initial introduction. The evil characters are predictable. The mysterious Ryker is probably the only one I liked...broody, moody, yet kind of caring, I hope he gets to be a bigger part of the future stories.
I don't know, the fact that I couldn't connect with these characters enough to care about them makes me think I might not want to read the rest...We'll see...Maybe I'll change my mind...
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