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With Better Editing This Could Be Four Star-worthy
July 4, 2016
This is the second book in a series focusing on firemen in Colorado. The editing is much improved over the first book, and combined with the continuation of strong and mostly-likeable characters, this is a very satisfying read.
But the editing. The copy editing is still spotty, especially in the beginning and at the end. And as far as the introduction of character flaws, Carrie's are left late enough that they don't get a lot of resolution, and I was left at the end, still kind of hating her for being unreasonable and (suddenly) narcissistic. But despite any critiques offered here, I look forward to reading the next book in the series.