- File Size: 2848 KB
- Print Length: 186 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: July 8, 2018
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B07FC8FGX8
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,045,901 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
Royal Magic Book 1 Kindle Edition
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This is, of course, a Cinderella variation to a certain degree. A disliked and abused daughter who ends up being the one chosen by the Prince. (This is not a spoiler, since it basically says that in the description of the book.) And it could be a great one, if only the editing wasn't so difficult.
The other thought I had was that perhaps the book was originally published in another language (it scans a bit like a book written in Spanish and then translated literally into English.) But the author states that she was born and raised in Texas. At any rate, if you can plow through the editing and don't have OCD this could be a great read.
Before you decide that I'm just ragging on this book, let me give you one of the lesser offenses against the English language that this story contains.
Everyone excepted me to stay and take over my father place one day.
One sentence that contains 2 errors. Excepted and expected are not the same word, nor are their meanings even close. And she is expected to take over her FATHER'S place, a job which he has and which it is expected she will take over. Although from what I've read so far, I have no idea why that's expected, since she is abused by everyone in the village and treated like an idiot by most of the inhabitants.
Ms. Pryor has an excellent idea, she just needs to go in and do a massive revision on the book. And, if she does that, then the number of stars for this book would go up substantially.
I don’t know if this was proofread at all. There are so many spelling, grammar, and consistency issues (changing from one tense to another), that it makes it hard to read. Hopefully, the author can get some people to look the next one over and make sure it’s really ready to be published.