Let me just start by saying that I love Shad. Awesome guy, great sense of humor, and has a addictive Youtube Channel. He's spent the last 10 years honing his craft and I can certainly appreciate that. But I can't help feel he's latched onto some pretty bad writing advice.
For one, he's distractingly heavy-handed with dialogue attributions. For another, he doesn't seem to understand the reason for--or meaning of--showing vs telling. Dialogue often times contains zero tension, making some interactions feel forced and info-dumpy. The beats of the story feel awfully paced. His style of writing needs work. His editor needs even more work, and the list goes on and on.
But here's the thing. Even the best-cut diamonds have flaws. And this book is most certainly a diamond. Shad has a good sense of story, plot, and character. He's also an amazing world builder (even if the way he conveys his world to the audience needs work). Definitely worth picking up this book.
I could write a longer review, but I'm currently on a deadline of my own. So just buy the book already.
- File Size: 5714 KB
- Print Length: 606 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: July 1, 2019
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B07TB4YSHX
- Text-to-Speech:
Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Not Enabled
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Amazon Best Sellers Rank:
#76,162 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
- #1261 in Coming of Age Fantasy eBooks
- #930 in Teen & Young Adult Coming of Age Fantasy eBooks
- #1000 in Fantasy Adventure Fiction
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