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Sin's Bite by [Bates, Patricia]
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3.8 out of 5 stars 20 customer reviews

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Length: 11 pages Word Wise: Enabled Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
Page Flip: Enabled

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Product Details

  • File Size: 93 KB
  • Print Length: 11 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publisher: Scarlet Publishing; 1 edition (December 10, 2011)
  • Publication Date: December 10, 2011
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B006KLYL94
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #36,821 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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What I Loved:

There wasn't anything I particularly loved about this book. It wasn't bad, just nothing really stands out.

What I Didn't Like:

I didn't feel connected to the characters at all. It was erotic, yes, but it would have been more so if we'd been given more time to get to know the characters.

My Overall Review:

This book is about 11 pages long, 20 pageturns if you are reading a Kindle at a small-sized font. That being said, I have read other short stories within erotica and they all had some decent plotset-ups, so I don't hold this lack-of-plot or character connection as understandable. Is it difficult to make readers connect to characters in so little time? Yes- but it can be done. Besides, while the words themselves evoke sexual connotations, true eroticism happens when a reader is intimately connected to the characters engaging in the sexual acts.

That being said, if you are looking for an erotic paranormal story just to get turned on, this might be your book. If you like substance and character development- skip it.

Disclaimer:

This book was provided for me at no charge, nor was I given compensation
of any kind for this review. This review only reflects my personal opinion.
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The beginning was a bit bland. Vamp girl receiving her bi-daily blood delivery.
The second part of the beginning built the story up nicely, Brooding vampire slayer, taking on a new mission, while kicking it in a dirty old bar.
And to be honest, that bar scene was the only part of the story worth remember. Everything else just seemed like a mash up, very confusing, And even a bit frustrating.
Not high on my list of recommends, but really, only the reader can decide. Get while it's free, I always say.
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The writing is terrible, bad enough that I couldn't even enjoy this very short, essentially plotless tale as the smut it tries to be. Poor punctuation, repetitive sentence structure, and stilted dialogue made for a wasted ten-minute read. Two stars only because I got it for free!
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No character development. There was a beginning, middle and end, yet it still felt incomplete. Even short stories have a sense of a plot and some closure. This work offers none of those. Disappointed that the "author" felt this draft was ready to be published.
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Erotically hot, would love to have more of the story. A few errors in grammar that can be overlooked. I've read so many of these where people just dwelled on the errors and not the story, you either or want to enjoy it or not. An excellent short story, but just a taste now I'm really hungry!
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Detailed erotic scenes but the story underneath it lacks enough detail for me. I love reading because it stirs the imagination, but I like to have a little more substance to go off of than this short story.
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It was very short, but, for some reason, very difficult to read. Everything seemed so unnatural and slow, even sex scenes were not very sexy. I didn't like it at all.
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A wonderful entertaining read. The book draws you into the story from the beautiful cover to the first paragraph. Enjoy this splendid short.
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