I loved this story. It held my interest from beginning to end, and it was spooky. I liked getting the creeps. Good imagery, too. Well done, thank you for sharing. Distracted23 May 18, 2011.
You do an especially good job capturing the growing uneasiness and outright terror that L.B. feels as his life goes on. The story does an excellent job building tension. Gonzo032 5/18/11.
I wish I had a six to give you for this extremely well written story. I love family history, handed down through the generations. You have done a wonderful job of turning it into a fascinating story. Excellent job! dj 5/18/11 --Fanstory.com
I like your attention to detail, as you carefully construct the story. The imagery, the character-depictions, the thoughts, dialogue and emotions are all well-crafted, and woven nicely into the fabric of the story. Andy --Fanstory.com