Stained Glass Stories: Volume 1 Kindle Edition
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- ASIN : B07X3MCHCK
- Publication date : August 25, 2019
- Language : English
- File size : 3669 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 73 pages
- Lending : Enabled
- Customer Reviews:
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I feel the author(s), particularly Dinsman, has great potential but besides the faith aspect, the stories lack. You could read the last paragraph in each story and get the gist of what all you need to know.
Overall, I felt the stories need to be more dynamic i.e. mysterious, adventurous etc. And I would have liked to see a common theme. I love impromptu writing, but the stories just seemed a little diverse in tone and embodiment for me.
In the future, the authors should concentrate on eliminating grammatical errors and the passive voice, as well as avoiding the temptation to tie up difficult interpersonal situations too neatly and quickly. Those sorts of things are messy in real life, and they can be left messy in a short story.
Good luck to the authors as they work on their next volume! In the future, I would suggest finding test readers and seeking feedback on the stories before publishing.