- File Size: 273 KB
- Print Length: 64 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publication Date: June 28, 2013
- Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00DPJN9NI
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Lending: Enabled
- Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,212,757 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
Standing on the Line (A Blackwolf Hot Shots erotic novella) Kindle Edition
"Children of Blood and Bone"
Tomi Adeyemi conjures a stunning world of dark magic and danger in her West African-inspired fantasy debut. Learn more
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There were a few things that I thought could have been better in this story. For one, the plot needed more fleshing out. This story felt more like an outline of a book rather than its own story. I think if this story was to be expanded beyond its ~64 pages it could have been better with added depth and development of the plot and characters. Another thing is that this story felt rushed. Things and events that took place within the story happened very fast that didn't flow well overall.
As for the hero and heroine, I had no problems with Deacon. I loved his character. However, it was a little harder for me to like Cheyenne in the beginning, but that did change as the story progressed. She had been a widow for two years and didn't not want to get involved with anyone especially now that she was the town's sheriff. Yet, she went against her reasoning and slept with Deacon anyways. Then she tried to convince herself that she didn't want anything to do with him after sleeping together. It was a lot of back and forth or uncertainty on Cheyenne's part and for that I developed a bit of dislike for her character. It was also her 180 degree turn around in her thinking and behavior towards the end that got me scratching my head. She was adamant on not getting together with Deacon, but then changed her mind one day later. I just thought it wasn't very believable or realistic.
Despite the criticisms I have with this story, it was still a decent read nonetheless. I appreciated that it wasn't filled with numerous typos, grammar issues and/or formatting issues which is a good thing. Nothing is worse than reading a book only to be distracted by numerous grammatical and formatting errors. Also, I did like the plot of the story; I just believe it needed more fleshing out. I do enjoy the author's writing style as it is a good fit for me and I will continue to read more of her stories.