Top critical review
Decent first effort. Good story, a little stilted in conversation, a few local details off, but captures the feel of the people
on December 27, 2015
The NYS Thruway runs from NYC to Albany, then turns to Buffalo. The highway north of Albany is called the Northway, as it was added later. There are almost no unknown caves, any local would all be well aware if they existed in their area. Lastly, local townspeople are portrayed one dimensionally, unlike the diverse mix that they are. Combined with the obtuse description of the protagonist, will probably skip subsequent efforts.